|Reviews for Bundle on the doorstep|
| KaKashiisWifey chapter 8 . 6/20/2011
so...where's the rest..i was having fun reading! TT_TT
| KaKashiisWifey chapter 4 . 6/20/2011
the best one yet!
| KaKashiisWifey chapter 2 . 6/20/2011
| KaKashiisWifey chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
lml wow i fall out of bed too!...smh..every morning
| Cherry Maiden chapter 8 . 3/12/2009
My! this is a great idea you have going! and they really do fall into place well! i say to all the authors so far great job! ill be watching for updates!
| AlfredisMyHero chapter 8 . 12/16/2006
omg tht was so funny!this story is awsome!
| amai-kaminari chapter 8 . 10/13/2006
Hilarious! _ Otou-san Gojyo and Oka-san Hakkai! _
| GreyLiliy chapter 8 . 9/17/2006
Good chapter, fun to see Gojyo with the baby again and Hakkai enjoying his time as a parental figure with someone actually younger than 5.
The only thing nagging me is the feeling that there's a huge chunk of the story line missing. What happened to the woman Sanzo had cornered, and what exactly happened with the two sisters? There are allusions made to them leaving, and hints of what happened, but there's nothing concrete. It almost feels like we skipped a chapter.
In any case, the read itself was enjoyable and I look foreward for the next installment.
| nimblnymph chapter 8 . 9/17/2006
JaySUS! A tag team from the Aussies! Nice set up by Luthi, and way to throw in some hinted Gojyo/Hakkai stuff, Ver-chan!
I love this project. I can't say it enough. This is a great way to expose a lot of writers in one go, and show off the different takes in plot and writing. Awesomeness.
Congrads on your first ficlet, Ver-chan. Now you're under orders from the Supreme Executive Goddess (aka, me) to write more. I enjoyed your writing style very much, especially the bits from Hakkai's POV. You write him very well.
And... I can't begin to say how excited I am about Shinigami's Wrath jumping on board. *snickers* This is just gonna get better and better...
| narrizan bein' lazy chapter 8 . 9/17/2006
heheh! Gojyo is good with children isn't he? Lovely and sweet. Poor Hakkai. Like I said having two of my own I know about the sleepless nights! I still have them sometimes.
| nimblnymph chapter 7 . 9/15/2006
Whoa! Congrads to Luthi for getting tagged. If no one else is picked, I nominate Shinigami's Wrath for the next chapter. This is such a flippin awesome project. I loves it.
| narrizan chapter 7 . 9/10/2006
I whoa! Blonde mum. Interesting
You guys have to check as I don't know if I might have made a mistake, but I thought it said somewhere (manga/anime) that half breeds cannot actually have offspring. So if the father was a youkai and one of them..it would have to be Hakkai. (Goku? EEk) Unless of course it is the woman who is youkai...and that would make Sanzo..(more EEKS)the father.
So hmm the next person has a tough choice to make. Unless you want to introduce, I don't know...one of the others into the mix. Dokugakuji is a good candidate. Or an OC I suppose.
But good to see this revived and up and running again.
Go you! Looking forward to more.
| GreyLiliy chapter 7 . 9/9/2006
Yay! It was about time this story got updated.
I love Hakkai's moment of bitterness about the child picking favorites. Very cute.
Hmm, and the story has progressed with the child's mother in the scene. Will be interesting to see what the next person has in store.
| xxcairoxx chapter 2 . 7/25/2006
LOVE IT! Funny haha and funny heehee.
| narrizan chapter 6 . 6/21/2006
Don't mind me, but may I put in my two cents worth!...
I suggest that someone tag, Grey Lily and/or nimblenymph for the next couple of chaps. Why? because I think they would be wonderful at it!
*runs off to hide,face in hands*