| Reviews for Bundle on the doorstep |
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   nimblnymph chapter 6 . 6/21/2006 You... You... I really don't know what to say other than bully for filler! You must be bored, dear... |
| GreyLiliy chapter 5 . 6/7/2006 And enter the possible mother figure and Gojyo's night. Interesting twist. |
| nimblnymph chapter 5 . 6/7/2006 HURRAY for someone else getting tagged! The chapter was short, but it was still fun with lots of little bits in there that were pretty clever. "Suicide sticks" would be my favorite, hehe... could see Hakkai maybe saying that sometime. Anyway, bravo and can't wait to see what happens with The Blonde... and the Bundle |
| Demonchild18 chapter 5 . 6/6/2006 I really like your story. It's funny it helps cheer me up when I'm feeling stressed. |
| narrizanzan 2 lazy 2 login chapter 5 . 6/6/2006 hmm, this is an interesting twist, I guess I'll have to wait to see what happens next! zan |
| AShauni21 chapter 4 . 5/5/2006 This is just too cute. I couldn't stop smiling. I ove the way everyones writing style flows really well. Blahsblah2001, great idea. |
| The Great White Emu chapter 4 . 4/24/2006 sanzo seems like he would be good with children |
| Mizuki hikari chapter 4 . 4/22/2006 lol how cute! continue |
| internalchaos chapter 4 . 4/21/2006 This is a great story! You guys are doing really good. Just the right balance of cuteness and humor. |
| narrizan chapter 4 . 4/20/2006 Well done, well done, all! You've all managed to keep them in character as well. This is the best idea ever for a round robin! Coolness, cannot wait to see Zell's contribution! The laughs and the smiles you gave me. Now my two are past the nappy stage... I can SO.O sympathise with poor Gojyo! (I was reminded of my own hubby's face when confronted for the first time with our first born's um, contribution.) A nice walk down meomory lane. It's also nice to see how the four would each cope with a baby. Thank you to Blahsblah2001 for thinking up the idea! Nicely done! *Applauds heartily* much love zan |
| nimblnymph chapter 4 . 4/20/2006 *applauds wildly* Woohoo! Bravo! A parental Sanzo, how cute! "The old chick with dick..." That was hysterical, and I might have to borrow it sometime in the future! This was very amusing, don't go selling yourself short in the humor department. I could just see Goku bouncing the baby around the house... aw! And there's nothing like a worried Sanzo. Of course... it would have been REALLY hilarious if we got to see some scary Hakkai in there! Thanks for joining the fun, Diva! |
| GreyLiliy chapter 4 . 4/20/2006 *claps* That was a sweet chapter. Yay for Sanzo being worried and having the 'deer in the headlights' face. Priceless. And yay! Baby's got a name, Mei...reminds me of Sanzo's kitty from Reload, MeiMei. Ahh, connections. I like Hakkai's excuse for being gone so long, you know he just wanted some time to himself. Good chapter! |
| The Great White Emu chapter 3 . 4/17/2006 haha not only are the authors playing tag but so is the sanzo-ikko with baby-duty:) |
| Mizuki hikari chapter 3 . 4/15/2006 lol . continue |
| grissom500 chapter 1 . 4/13/2006 this is just a side note, but Gojyo can't have children because he is a half-breed...he shoots blanks XD. |