| Reviews for Bundle on the doorstep |
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   Chatterpie chapter 3 . 4/13/2006 Well, this is for all three chapters, really. It's fecking awesome! So cute! NimblNymph's chapter had me laughing so loud, my Gramp thought someone had broken in or something. |
| nimblnymph chapter 3 . 4/13/2006 YES! Wonderfully done, Liliy! That last bit with Hakkai whistling and Sanzo shouting... for some reason it made me think of this really old cartoon where the wife had a rolling pin she used to whack her husband in the head with if he was out too late or something. Anyway, can't wait to see what the new Tag person does... |
| chaosbfly chapter 1 . 4/13/2006 "Punch. / 'Go away.' / Punch. / 'Dammit, Hakkai...' That's just lovely... and strangely familiar: Coffee is for those that don't have the good sense to go back to bed. |
| Steph -Ifni no Miko chapter 3 . 4/12/2006 XD The best thing about Sanzo getting the baby is that he has monkly minions he can foist all the actual work onto. |
| Mitsuru Aki chapter 2 . 4/8/2006 thank u Nimblnymph, cause this chapter was fun! *lots of applause* I never really thought of Gojyo acting that way around babies...but you know, I'm really not surprised. I like it! Make sure you post the next chapter quick! |
| GreyLiliy chapter 2 . 4/6/2006 Poor Gojyo. XD The most evil task of baby-care and he gets it first. Ha ha ha. Hakkai's going to kill him. Good stuff. Oh, my chapter's up next...hm. gotta work on that. |
| goku518 chapter 2 . 4/6/2006 lmao omg...that was so funny . poor poor gojyo *shakes head* ok...can't wait to read the next chap byes |
| GreyLiliy chapter 1 . 4/3/2006 Oh, what a cute start. Tag story? Ha ha, that's awsome. It'll be fun to see what comes out of this. |
| nimblnymph chapter 1 . 4/1/2006 HAHAHA! This is brilliantly fun! And this chapter was so amusing. Okay, I'll take the bait and send you something tonight. And then... *grins and rubs hands together* Who am I gonna pick on next? |