Reviews for Defeated
oswin-the-girl-who-can chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
I laughed the entire way through! I loved your sarcastic writing style, it fit perfectly with the story. Wonderfully written and such a cute idea that could definitely be an Omake in the manga. Thanks for the laughs! :)
CherreeSherree chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
lol XD i could so imagine this scene in the real show :)
Pyromaniac-Girl chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
That was a really cool fic!

I enjoyed reading it! Fai and Kurogane are so cool!

Have a good day!
Damatris chapter 1 . 9/11/2007
This was funny. That was realy something that could be happening X) Sorry I don't have time to give better comment but I loved it!
WildfireDreams chapter 1 . 8/3/2007
heh too funny _
Lunais chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
Haha, brilliant. He never even thought to turn it the other way.
Hikaru Kosuzaku chapter 1 . 8/15/2006

Absolutely love it...
DemonUntilDeath chapter 1 . 7/27/2006
ha, I loved it! that was so funny!
R.S.Azalea chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
hahahaha! that was funny.
K. Skylian F chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
lol LOL hahahahaya! That is so funny. He was twisting the wrong way the whole time. He didn't even THINK of trying to turn the other way. LOL
Cheri-sama chapter 1 . 4/21/2006

Can I say I love this? It made my morning! I figured about halfway through that that was his problem but I wanted to know how it was all gonna go down.

*dies laughing*

Poor Kurogane...
sugahcat chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
lol, poor Kuro-rin xD
supernova523 chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
Hee, hee... Poor Kurogane! ]
Yurikitsune chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
Just then, the devil walked in—

Correction—Fai walked in, but there really wasn’t much of a difference now in Kurogane’s eyes.- XDXD


it was really difficult not to burst out in laughter at several parts..

wonderful fic,
Ontogenesis chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
Hahaha, this is hilarious! Proud and slightly psychotic Kurogane is such fun, isn't he?
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