Reviews for Far Behind
KendrixTermina chapter 1 . 5/24/2014
Sad, concise and nuanced.

Good work.
snipr chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
Great GITS Fiction, those are too rare.

My only complaint is the length, of course.
Serena KittyKat chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
You’re story lacks detail and descriptions. If a new charter comes in, tell the reader a little about that person. There is a certain tone I like that is used. Writer can’t always bring in another charter then go back in the next line/sentence to the first one. There was some good details in areas. Lacks descriptions and details. If u add more of that into this story I think I’ll be a better Drama/Angst story.
Negotiatrix chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
At first I thought this was rather sparse and could use some filling out. But by the time I got to the end I liked the tone you set and the lack of detail or action. The distant way Batou thinks about what happened to Misagi contrasts nicely with how he dwells on his non-conversation with the Major. Good story!
Magnusrae chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
Awesome. I loved the stark brutality of it. Batou's unrequited love for the Major is an interesting subject and your ending was just perfect.