Reviews for Busted!
notsosaintly chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
I was directed here by Writermerrin. So, huh, I don't know if I should thank her or thank YOU. Okay, you it is.

I am in love with Vala. Oh, did I say that? I meant Daniel. The whole Daniel/Vala thing. It's become a bit of an obsession actually. I positively admire how she treats Daniel and her lackadaisical attitude toward what people think of her. They lying thing... well, I certainly don't condone blatant lying, but... How did I get back to the 'I love Vala' thing? *smacks forehead* Daniel. Daniel. I love Daniel. Oh, hell, I just want to be Vala. (You know that fight scene in Season 8?... That.)

You've captured the dialogue quirks of the characters perfectly. I can see their facial expressions as I read the words. Beautifully done. I will be reading more as I get the time, you can be assured.
mishy-mo chapter 1 . 4/3/2006
ha ha sweet!
janissima chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
Very good and very funny! Love how Daniel turned the tables on Jack. And Jack's reaction to the gossop that Sam might be pregnant was priceless.
froggy0319 chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
Sneaky Daniel, but what a way to find out ;)
cinderella2122 chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
LOL That was really funny!

Pandora of Ithilien chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
go, danny! that caught them out! not that they were hiding it well...
liketoread chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
Very cute! Guess Daniel got his payback!