Reviews for Internal Affairs
One-Winged Angel of Death chapter 13 . 5/20
Too bad that the author seems to have left the site. Man and just at the good part. Well if you're still on the site and are bored of this story give me a PM and I'll finish it.

Did I mention I love this story
Domino Archer chapter 16 . 4/3/2013
She had sex with Syrus?! That no good whore!
Not even a condom!.
train'sgirl92 chapter 16 . 7/27/2010
OMG!Can't wait for another chappy!

I wonder what happens 2 poor Jay!*sniff sniff* that 2 timing RUBY!
fanfics chapter 16 . 5/5/2010
That was an interesting story,hope next chp comes soon.
pharaoh122live.com chapter 16 . 3/31/2010
When is da next chapter? That is my Email.
honebami chapter 16 . 6/4/2009
Um...I like the story...but don't you think you should make the characters older? I mean...Hel-lo! 14 years old and having sex so many times?
Princesa de la Luna chapter 16 . 3/22/2008
HI THIS STORY AND CHAPTER WAS AWESOME AND I LIKED IT VERY MUCH. I CAN'T WAIT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. BYE UNTIL NEXT TIME PLEASE UPDATE THANK YOU.
The Dark Angel of Death chapter 16 . 1/26/2008
What the...what is wrong with you? Seriously, what were you thinking when you wrote this pornographic movie? I understand it's a lemon and that they're graphic, but not this graphic. When you write it this graphic you've basically just written porn. You should seriously consider rewriting this chapter, along with Jaden's 'lemon'.
devinswift chapter 16 . 6/13/2007
yo whats up with t

he next chapters
Jason chapter 16 . 3/8/2007
I loved the book and all the diffrent twist and truns. keep writing.
devinswift chapter 16 . 2/4/2007
hey hurry up with that chapter jaden and alexis need to have sex
equalizer chapter 16 . 1/28/2007
this is an OUTRAGE! what are you doing to jaden!{uncontrollable anger seeps from equalizer's eye's}

may you be burned by the imaculate&collaosal enrgy of an iffinity of flames you # $$%%#%&#&&%#& $%%$%*&!
Rachel Balsdon chapter 6 . 1/26/2007
loved it
Devon chapter 16 . 1/26/2007
How the HEL! DO YOU KNOW THAT!
Critic chapter 16 . 1/7/2007
Ruby is a stupid slut. She needs to work her problems out.
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