Reviews for Hopeless
Rennet chapter 1 . 4/28/2014
This is awesome!
Melannen Halfelven chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
*wipes a tear* lovely, absolutely lovely!
elfchicks chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
Beautiful. I always liked that part and you did a very good job of capturing the moment

Aranel
Eriala chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
Nice.

The only suggestion I could possibly make is: add more. This is good quality and very well written, but it hasn't got any ideas that the thousands of other variations on this story have. What new thoughts and details can you come up with?

*Feta
Yemi Hikari chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
Hi. I like it a lot. Puts the emotions out very well.

Question - Not really about your story. More of wondering why Silmarillion and Lord of the Rings have seperate listings? The Hobbit doesn't.
The Battling Bard chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
Good story, you forgot the bit about Maedhros begging Fingon to kill him though. Very well written in any case.