Reviews for Shadow, Falling
GamerGirl54321 chapter 1 . 5/28/2014
My jaw literally dropped... Holy crap, that was...disturbing...
lalalala chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
I loved the end. "Watch where you breathe. You never know when you might inhale a little bit of Shadow." Lol.
Hamato Kameko chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
This was fantastically grotesque.

While I don't regret them bringing Shadow back (fangirl alert), it does bug me pretty hardcore how they did it. Then again it bugs me how they've changed Knuckles since the early games, too. Not design, but personality-wise, I mean.

Sega's just bad at this sometimes.
Inactive Account708 chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
Lol, like the ending line. Overall it's a good story. One more thing though...

(Snaps gas mask on face)

(muffled)You can't be too careful.

(Ashley, my cousin, walks past in the background inhaling huge deep breaths)

Ashley: Ahhh, essence of burnt Shadow. I love it.
Silas Goodwill chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
...well Its true that Decending into the atmosphere would vaporize, freeze, and ignite you...but how exactly does a spacestation get enough energy to fire a cannon that manages to go faster than the speed of light. And don't say it's from the chaous emerads, because if it is, everytime someone uses them to 'Power Up" it should naturaly cause them to tear a Black Hole in time and space...see, you can't explain EVERY thing...but yes, Shadow reappearing is something of a failur...that plus all the random caracters SEGA stuffs into all the new games...
Unknownlight chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
I have nothing to say that hasn't already been said, so I'll say this: Awesome story! *favs*

Also: "Watch where you breathe. You never know when you might inhale a little bit of Shadow."

I love that line.
TazHall chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
I don't know whether to laugh or cry so I'll do it in turn.

*does it*

Okay, that was GOLD! Disturbing, hilarious and gold. IMO, I guess a compromise could be even if they intended to bring back Shads, they could have at least let him rest for a couple games and expand more on the main heros again.

I personally wish they would expand on Knux's heritage and the history of Angel Island. For goodness sakes, Archie made a whole Knuckles comic series out of that premise (though I despise getting lost in the sea of echidnas they flooded us with).

Good one once again,

Taz
Shi-Long Begone chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
God, this was good. Normally, I would not read such fictions, but this was hilarious.
Rebeldynasty chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
I can understand your distaste for the way they brought him back...I did not really like how he returned in Sonic Heroes.

However, his own game, "Shadow the Hedgehog" hasm uch better graphics, and is more in depth about his past, and his purpose.

I, like many others, felt that bringing him back cheapened his death...but regardless, I am glad they came out with a game about him strictly. Sonic Heroes was a joke...

I see your point...morbid, though.
Bonzi77 chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
Yay aphyxelli...whatever. :P Great story. See Shadow? You're unfixably dead.

Shadow: Quiet you. Do you have your own game yet?

Me: No...;_;
StarSparklez chapter 1 . 5/1/2006
Breath a bit of Shadow!* Inhales deeply and releases it in a loving sigh.*

Yeah...

I like him better alive though, lol.

Nice one!
Shamanic Shaymin chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
Aw man, I remember this. Down to the "You might breathe a little Shadow" bit too. XDD;

May I be allowed for a rebuttal, though? Okie dokies. *nod* Personally, I always thought the way Shadow's death was handled in the games was stupid. NOT in a "OMG MAH SHOADOW'S DED ITS NOT FAIR!11!1!1" way, but in a "...Okay, what the heck just happened?" baffled sorta thing, and not the way SEGA intended. Shadow's death would've been elaborated more in the games: I would've been bawling my eyes out, like say, what happened to Aeris in FF7. But nope. Shadow goes poof, for no reason whatsoever other than to play dramatic music and what seemed like a quick effort to wrap the game up. His sacrifice was vague: why complain about an "OMGCHEAPENEDDEATH!1!1" when the death itself was cheap? No wonder we had all this debate and fanfiction, even BEFORE "Sonic Heroes" came out. XDD

Regarding the scientific details listed, I find it interesting how in "Shadow" (I know, I know-people get hives and super violent and ranty when I mention the game's name alone), Shadow was saved because Eggman sent one of his robots after him-I assume he must've had pretty quick timing, considering the robot reached Shadow before he got frozen and such. XDD;

I know I'll get written off as another idiot for this, but hey, felt like making a point as well. *nod*
Ready-Liver chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
Well you didn't take into reality the many parts of Shadow. When he fell he was initially Super Shadow and still contious. Also, Shadow is an experiment that was created as the Ultimate Life-Form. He was a project of immortality(read my story Rogue Agents: Project Shadow to understand or the Sonic Adventure 2 guide where it shows Rouge's finding of Shadow.) and can't simply die by even falling through the atmosphere. I'm sorry, but if you don't do your research then other people will, and point it out to you. My story isn't based off a bunch of stuff I made up, only parts of it.
N. Harmonik chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
Ha ha, quite amusing. Obviously, the people who had this removed can't take a joke. Besides, what's wrong with Shadow being reunited with Maria?

Speaking of which, do you think you could repost that Amy crossover story please?