Reviews for New World Order
Yuri Space Pirate chapter 1 . 5/4/2006
Ok, read this. Doing sequels is pretty hard I think. I don't think I would ever attempt expanding on someone else's work, but points for having the guts to try. Description I think was really good. Your use of point of view is also quite good. Plot wise I can't say much yet of course. Seems you are heading in a political drama type direction. Those can be quite hard. You have to balance a number of things like trying keep the auidence entertained instead of getting bogged down with the story. You must also avoid pretentiousness and keeping you commentary clever instead of just advetising biased political leanings. Either way please keep writing in the TS section.