it's cute, innocent with no major interactions of a huge story line. strangly enough it's one of those relaxing sort of story. (don't think of me as pervert. i mean relaxing as in it's not too elaborate and long-lasting.) i liked it. Honest.

Oh, I love it :D It's so short but you capture so many things in this.

*shields eyes* I'd already seen that spoiler pic of Riza's back but there are probably some non-scanlation-reading people that haven't yet. It would be good to take the spoiler out of the summary. xP

Me love it!

Continue! I'm loving it!

omg. I loved it. Riza x Roy fanfiction always fascinates me! _

Ah, Roy cocky as ever...I liked it

nice story though ive seen almost the complete series of fma i dont rememeber anything about riza having any markings on her back... do you know where i can find a pic of that? if so would you be so kind as to e-mail it to me at

love teh story very well writen-x

*sigh!* if only the tatoo means what we want it to mean...but i wish that it will be something positive about royai...wah! the suspense in the manga is killing me!

the story is nice...yup, simple and sweet... i like those kinds of stories...yeah! way to go!

*goes off obsessively theorizing about riza's back with her sister...*

Aw. Me likie.

Hawkeye has a tatoo?

Oh come on. You can't stop there!

*pout*

I'm dying to see what the real reason for that array is, though... it is one kick-butt array...

I'm still hoping it was given to her by Roy. There's something absolutely romantic and possessive about that. Somehow, however, I'm thinking it won't be so.

Damn... They need to get chapter 58 up soon, or I'll go crazy... Oh well, this was very sweet, good job!

This is the most discussed topic about Manga this year. I was waiting to see a fic about it. This is very well-done. Do you think that is actually what it is or do you have a different theory?

this was sweet. i haven't read the manga (ive only seen the tv series) is it any good? keep writing.