Reviews for Spring Break
TwilightTarabekah chapter 20 . 11/20/2006
It was amazing, and yet...

No offense, but the ending was just kind of weird. It seemed to be lacking something after what had happened in the rest of the story. Riza says "I can't let you do that!" but then she just gives up. Even if she did love him, I don't think she'd give in that easily...

Still awesome, just didn't care much for the ending.

TT
bornfreeeee chapter 20 . 10/19/2006
YES! Make a squeal! lol Love the story! _
Lisa214 chapter 20 . 9/4/2006
it's so sad but at the end they're together D

I love your story!

it's soo good!
Unexpected Hopeless Romantic chapter 20 . 9/1/2006
great job..yah..teary ending..jke!
ShikamaruHatake chapter 2 . 8/29/2006
"oops?" he says "oops"? wow for a ladies man he really is stupid.
ShikamaruHatake chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
i can so see roy doing a victory dance! lol!
Hayashi Azuma chapter 20 . 8/27/2006
aah-so sad!

'please, keep writing1'
Hayashi Azuma chapter 7 . 8/27/2006
dun-dun-dun!

'please, keep writing!'
Hayashi Azuma chapter 1 . 8/27/2006
you bet you should continue this!

'please, keep writing!'
foxgirl-san chapter 20 . 8/27/2006
Make a sequal!
UmiKodo-chan chapter 20 . 8/26/2006
Aw that was a sweet ending. Oh and I hope you guys liked the movie. I thought it was sad. -_-'
Amy chapter 20 . 8/26/2006
Any hopeless Royai fan will love this story! It was well written, though in some places, the plot seemed kind of "out-there" in the sense that I really cant imagine some of it ever happening in the anime. The author primarily dwells on the dialogue, which is fine for me, becasue personally, I get bored of reading "the beautiful, redish yellow leaf glided gently to the frost bitten fall ground." The language was plain, simple, easy to read. Overall, I'd give it an 8.
MoonStarDutchess chapter 20 . 8/25/2006
I love it! Great job
C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only chapter 20 . 8/24/2006
Creepy...and tragic...
RedSoul chapter 20 . 8/24/2006
Aww... C'mon, its finished already? Well, I enjoyed reading it!
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