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hi! uh i know this story was last updated in 2006, & might never be again, but i still think it’s worth following in case you do find some inspiration somewhere. this story is amazing! the path harry has taken since he ran away from the dursley’s is astounding, especially since he’s doing it all to be able to protect row & jack.
(also ugh daphne greengrass back off u hag)
i’ve never read a story quite like this one & trust me i read A LOT of these stories lol, & i couldn’t quite manage to take time to stop after each chapter & jot a review so i’m doing it all now.
the dursley’s suck hard, as per usual. the thing with him claiming the cupboard was ! “this is mine, so i’ll make it forever mine” so petty, harry. also row & jack aaa! i love them & the dynamic between them & harry. (question: was row being the descendant of ravenclaw going to be a big plot point at some point in the story?)
harry totally ignoring hogwarts until being blackmailed into attending was . also his treatment of snape was the BEST. about time he got what was coming to him.
the whole dumbledore sneaking around & finding out what harry did to the dursley’s originally made me panic, especially bc i didn’t know what he was going to do to harry for it, but then the whole boggart thing happened & dumbledore was like “ah he did it for them” & stopped caring? so power to harry i guess.
uh ,,, i don’t really have anything else to say except i hope you’re okay! & maybe one day you’ll come back to this story, if not to update it, just to remember the story you made.
thanks for writing!

Great story , any chance of completing it ?

Thanks for writing it !

This story has started to piss me off just by virtue of Harry and Row. Their actions are idiotic.

Hopeless story! I was really excited initially thinking that it was different. But seeing Harry staying at home while Row was at Hogwarts was annoying. I still continued reading thinking that it will get better. But chapter 9 was the last nail on the coffin. I mean Row is not Harry’s real sister but still he loves her very much, teaches her all magic before Hogwarts, spends all the money for her fees and study materials and rushes to her at Hogwarts at the first sign of danger to Row. And what does the GREAT Row do? Force him to go to the chamber and face a basilisk to save Ginny because she was kind to Hermione!? Even when Harry insists to inform a teacher? Inspite of being aware that Harry could be killed or could be found out at Hogwarts while he was not supposed to be there! Hell, he was actually sacrificing his Hogwarts ‘education’ coz he was worried about being controlled again. And Row was happy to blow his cover or get him killed instead of asking a teacher for help. I regret reading 9 whole chapters:(

14 yeats since updated. Safe to say its abandoned. A shame. Whats here is good.

it would be cool if You could add someone named Gary,
this story is great, keep up the good work.

when are You going to update?

Sorry, not really interested in stories with a Mary-Sue. They are rarely well-written. Not going to waste my time.

Okay I have a question. Why hasn't Harry brought up the matter of WHY Sirius keeps mentioning how HARRY and ROW would be all alone while he worked? What about Jack? Even though hes a squib, HES supposed to be living with Harry and Row while staying with Sirius isn't he? So what if he a squib? HES old enough to STILL be taking care of HIS siblings without adult supervision like hes been doing for the last couple of years. Plus since he was 15 when Row started Hogwarts, probably 16 when Harry started, shouldn't his 17th birthday be coming up soon? If he was a wizard he'd be comsidered an ADULT in their world at 17. Squib or not Row Harry don't need adults babysitting them when Sirius can't be around when they ALREADY have their big brother around to watch them instead.

Rowena should confront Snape about this 'uncle/niece' nonsense and demand PROOF of his claims. ESPECIALLY since she TOOK a BLOOD inheiritance test back in Gringotts that ALREADY told her that she WASN'T related to ANYBODY in the magical world, least of all HIM. *lol* if a magical blood inheiritance test itself says that she ISN'T related to HIM or anybody else who COULD have a claim on her in the magical world, why should she do ANYTHING he says just because he CLAIMS to be her uncle? *lol* Plus when the whole announcement about her being the heir of Ravenclaw came out, she should have done MORE to refute THAT one too, and bring up the test as well. If ahe was related to the Ravenclaw line in ANY way, wouldn't it have come up on the test too? *lol*

I would have loved to see the plot Daphne and her mother had cooked up unravel and be revealed

i really enjoyed this, i do think it wouldve been better with 20-30k less. shame its not finisth

creating problems only to offer the solutions and gain gratitude, harry really has to read sun tzu

yeah putting jack and snape together is a real good idea a squib without mental shields in the room with that basterd, see what i mean with oblivious(guilable)