At first I wasn’t really into the plot. But I gave this story a chance and I’m glad I did. I am interested to read more and hope that the author comes back tp continue this work.

I hope you're okay. Love the story, it's a shame you haven't updated.

why does jack hate books when it was jack who read the Lord of the Rings and wanted Harry to "throw a fireball like gandalf." He obviously enjoys reading books, he wouldn't have gotten through Lord of the Rings otherwise and yet every chance he gets he goes "ugh nerds" as if he isn't one. I don't get it.

This is truly part of the 1/10th of fanfics that are actually good. Thank you for this work of art here I can't wait to enjoy finishing this story. Thank you again, you don't know how many stories I've gone through trying to find quality and originality such as this. I just realized that might come off as sarcastic; sorry if that is how you read my last sentence I am being genuine here with my gratitude for your writing this.

Figure a way to free Sirius and mix him with Jack and Harry! Also hoping Harry broke soe bones of Snaoes! Maybeblet Amekia be a help and survive! Susan abd Germione would be good for Harry!

I never doubt the ministry's incompetence, but you really made Harry look incompetent. They didn't even try to apparate, and the shrieking shack is in hogsmeade... not to mention, the map shows animagus real names and this was confirmed when the twins took a gander at the map. Why do they not know who Peter Pettigrew is? The man had to be in the original publishing of Black's capture, he was given a order of merlin after all...

Damn! This is unfinished? Someone needs to pick this up and do it justice because ch1 alone has me more excited to read then I've been in a long time, and all I do for fun is read.

Great story.

The whole part with “Without power there can be no freedom. If that means I walk my path alone, so be it. I choose the path of power,” reminds me of the Sith Code from Star Wars. Not that I think that Harry is evil, of course, but there are some clear parallels to “Through strength I gain power. Through power I gain victory. Through victory my chains are broken…”

So he does nothing to the Weasleys for doing that to him and goes to their house instead to spend some time? Go f*ck yourself author for making me waste my time on this pathetic edgelord Harry. Awful story

This is my absolute favorite fanfic. I like how Harry does not follow anyone's expectations and really DOESN'T care how other's see him. I would like a cool reveal where something happens and he reveals his full power in front of everybody though, maybe in the great hall. I know it's been a long time but I am still hoping this get's continued because Row being kidnapped and guarded by seamonsters will definitely not sit well with Harry and I am wondering whether rage will get the better of him when he finds out. Probably won't be so fun for Dumbeldore though... I can imagine Harry doing some crazy magic(maybe some ancient magic from his book) and barely stopping himself from revealing his wandless magic, rescuing row and then facing Dumbeldore saying "You are very lucky I am too exhousted to hurt you right now" or something like that.

Hey Jack have seen thru your choice of favorite stories you didn't fall off the face of the me to mention your abandonment of your own least as far as fan fiction site pity liked where you were going with I know these are written fun and personal warm and fuzzies. !am enjoying your story picks and can only hope your muse that end all I can say is Thank You and more please

Oh, f... I thought it will be around "harmony" thing, but Harry will be at Slytherin. Hate this twist actually. And that start of relaitionships begin in very odd way. It's disgusting when Harry kinda do obliviate thing on Hermione just because she saw what he didn't want to be seen. Moreover Hermione didn't mean share his secret with anyone, but Harry change her memory anyway. True Slytherine. I have to drop this, because I hate this kind of story developing. Nothing personal.

this sucks

Pourquoi les meilleures histoires ne sont jamais terminées, c'est assez frustrant de se dire qu'on ne connaîtra probablement jamais la fin. Dommage