This is my absolute favorite fanfic. I like how Harry does not follow anyone's expectations and really DOESN'T care how other's see him. I would like a cool reveal where something happens and he reveals his full power in front of everybody though, maybe in the great hall. I know it's been a long time but I am still hoping this get's continued because Row being kidnapped and guarded by seamonsters will definitely not sit well with Harry and I am wondering whether rage will get the better of him when he finds out. Probably won't be so fun for Dumbeldore though... I can imagine Harry doing some crazy magic(maybe some ancient magic from his book) and barely stopping himself from revealing his wandless magic, rescuing row and then facing Dumbeldore saying "You are very lucky I am too exhousted to hurt you right now" or something like that.

Hey Jack have seen thru your choice of favorite stories you didn't fall off the face of the me to mention your abandonment of your own least as far as fan fiction site pity liked where you were going with I know these are written fun and personal warm and fuzzies. !am enjoying your story picks and can only hope your muse that end all I can say is Thank You and more please

Oh, f... I thought it will be around "harmony" thing, but Harry will be at Slytherin. Hate this twist actually. And that start of relaitionships begin in very odd way. It's disgusting when Harry kinda do obliviate thing on Hermione just because she saw what he didn't want to be seen. Moreover Hermione didn't mean share his secret with anyone, but Harry change her memory anyway. True Slytherine. I have to drop this, because I hate this kind of story developing. Nothing personal.

this sucks

Pourquoi les meilleures histoires ne sont jamais terminées, c'est assez frustrant de se dire qu'on ne connaîtra probablement jamais la fin. Dommage

frankly. it's stupid that "there is no way out of it". simply leave the country. glamour up, then leave the country. it's so stupid in fics like these where harry is supposed to be smart, but is just dumb, and only does the most straightforward thing possible. and dumbles is so annoying in this fic. you need to pick how you want him to be and stick with it. you jump from him crying over the abusive household that he put harry into, to scheming on how best to get Harry's trust in a very unrealistic, and roundabout way.

Dumbledore can outwit Harry while sucking cock like his dead whore sister, and the Gryffindors are always right. Hope their families get rape and butchered. Hope Ron gets castrated and watch his sister get raped and sold off.

Row is being a burden. I want her out!

I hate when my pregret is inadequate.

WARNING TO NEW READERS
I enjoy an abandoned story from time to time but this one wasn’t with it for me. There’s a lot of build up and a lot of hiding true power. I knew that the story at least went to the first task so I figured I’d have the QWC and the first task to get some pay off. Though I don’t think there’s anything to spoil except false hope...
SPOILER ALERT At the Quidditch World Cup he and friends portkey away at first sign of trouble. And in the first task he sits on a conjured lawn chair until time runs out.
Both of which are very in-character for this hardened, survivor Harry. And in. A full story I would think it’s hilarious and apropos. But in an abandoned story with no chance of later payoff it’s disappointing

I hate when my pregret is inadequate.

WARNING TO NEW READERS
I enjoy an abandoned WIP from time to time but this one wasn’t worth it for me. There’s a lot of build up and a lot of hiding true power. I knew that the story at least went to the first task so I figured I’d have the QWC and the first task to get some pay off.
Though I don’t think there’s anything to spoil except false hope...SPOILER ALERT! At the Quidditch World Cup he and friends portkey away at first sign of trouble. And in the first task he sits on a conjured lawn chair until time runs out.
Both of which are very in-character for this hardened, survivor Harry. And in. A full story I would think it’s hilarious and apropos. But in an abandoned story with no chance of later payoff it’s disappointing

Ugh! This story is off to such a good start I almost just want to stop reading here and save myself the despair of the eternal cliffhanger I know awaits.

But I won’t.

I hate all the other students. Harry deserves better.

Why can’t Snape and Dumbledore just spontaneously combust and leave Harry alone?

DUMB BLASTED ACCURSED VILE SNAPE!

I hate Dumbledore.