Reviews for What might have been
BookFreak976 chapter 2 . 3/25/2013
Sorry, but Alanna seems kind of Mary Sueish to me. I mean, really?
Fire-Metal-Horse17 chapter 5 . 12/29/2009
Hurry up and finish the damn thing off!

You've got me hooked!
RavenRed chapter 5 . 10/29/2007
the story is really good! please continue! please, please, please!
Lady Mage chapter 5 . 2/18/2007
Please update soon... that was way too short. But I'll forgive you if you post more soon!

mage
Lady Mage chapter 2 . 2/18/2007
Very nice. I'll bet she wins!

mage
Lady Mage chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
This is very interesting... going to go on reading, definately...

magewhisperer
uddin chapter 5 . 8/16/2006
pritty short but thats ok! hmm whats Thom gonna do? can't wait update soon! D
uddin chapter 3 . 8/16/2006
good chapter but I think Thom gave up a lil too fast but besides that I like it. D
uddin chapter 2 . 8/16/2006
ah ha a duel with her own brother! I hope she beats him bad! D
uddin chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
wow going to the convent sure has changed Alanna! lol. I like the story so far, that George is just too irresistabe isn't he! D
Katamarigrl chapter 5 . 8/7/2006
Ok I so freaking love this keep it up, accept for the George Alanna love thing it just seemed way too sudden...UPDATE SOON
Lizzie Auden chapter 5 . 7/16/2006
Keep updating!
Helen chapter 5 . 7/14/2006
please please please update soon this tory is amazing its so good. update soon!
steff chapter 5 . 7/12/2006
my real name in this is redHAIRgreenEYEDmOnStEr. but i was just wondering if thom was gonna ask jon if george could become baron of Pirates swoop?because that would be cool, but a little weird because we already know that george becomes the baron of Pirates swoop. but other then that, i think its really great!
Helen chapter 3 . 6/6/2006
please please please please please update soon it was really good. i can't wait till you updait. bye
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