|Reviews for A SMALL STOP|
| gunman chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
Alright. I liked this chapter. You've got the personalities of the characters pretty down pat, not to mention skills.
The only thing I have a problem with, is the fact that the chapter... was too short.
Aside from that, it was really fun to read. Had the story been longer and with more interactions, I'd probably have a lot more to say.
Regardless, this is a good start. This ninja character is a little interesting, but he obviously doesn't know much about Senshi or about Rushuna. I mean, a smart ninja would have followed the group around and observed them in an actual fight. Just attacking an enemy with no prior knowledge of their skills is just... amateurous.
Hope to see more soon.