Reviews for The Boy with the Mustang
xIcexQueenX07x chapter 1 . 5/31/2006
Aww. So heartbreaking.

firehop chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
I really dig this story. It probably helps that it's fresh and different, something I haven't seen before. You did a really good job of portraying Mark's desperation. Some of it almost reads like prose poetry.

Really good job. Deserves more reviews.
Shadows in the City Lights chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
Oh, wow. Quite simply, WOW. I know it's mean and wrong of me, but I love all of these Mark-deals-with-past-death stories (all TWO that I've found) and this is simply wow. I love how you wrote the confusion 'Lauren, Lauren, Lauren' etc... It was simply mind-boggling. Just. WOW.