Reviews for Come With Me
Hayley Mercer chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
While I'll admit that you do have a real writing ability, you should really take care to not write stories who's main character is such a blatant Mary Sue. I need hardly reming you of how most people find them highly irritating, and I count myself among them. In particular, the portrayal of Sarah is particularly aggravating (for me at least). This story has really good potential, but you do need to consider making drastic changes to Sam's character (starting with the boys name which was very uncommon for girls in 1899) to make her easier to relate to, and, indeed, easier to read about.
Onomatopeia Jones chapter 1 . 8/11/2006
You are an awesome writer. Seriously. I liked this one shot. So sweet!

DallyWinton's.PunkPrincess chapter 1 . 7/10/2006
ManhattanNewsie chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
That was SO sweet
Joker is Poker with a J chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
lol! I loved it! It was so cute, arrghh! WE HATE RYAN! Great one shot tho! Beautiful!


Joker is Poker with a J~
elleestJenn chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
OO yeah! it was really cute. I enjoyed reading it.