Reviews for The Set Up
Mojito737 chapter 19 . 1/12
I swear I'm going to cry. This chapter was amazing epilog... epilog... No really. I'm going to cry. This just can't be over! Why!? :'( But I enjoyed your story. I really did. Thank you for this. :)
Watership's Nightwish Rat chapter 19 . 1/8
Nice end to a great story! Haha, that picture. Count on Riggs to bring back "old haunts." LOL
Koko chapter 18 . 1/7
Awe yes! Can't wait for moree. I really enjoyed the chapter. Well written and in character
Watership's Nightwish Rat chapter 18 . 12/24/2016
"Hmm... yeah, but did I pinky swear?"
Oh, Riggs. LOL

I recommend getting rid of "entire" in the last sentence, since it doesn't fit with "the rest of." You don't have to, though, just a suggestion.

Overall, a good chapter. Yeah, Martin would have a hard time without Roger. Harder time than with him, I mean. Haha. I feel bad for Riggs for his reason of joining the police, but he certainly gets the job done, at least. Even if his tactics are... unorthodox?
Mojito737 chapter 18 . 12/23/2016
I can't believe that this story is actualy going to 's too good to end. :'(
Mojito737 chapter 17 . 12/19/2016
This story is upsolutely amazing! And you just have to end this chapter with cliffhanger. That's not fair, keeping us tens like this. Can't wait for update! Oh and I really admire you. I couldn't believe my eyes when I found out that you have published this story in 2006. It's over ten years now and you are still updating. I'm clapping my hands.
Watership's Nightwish Rat chapter 17 . 11/11/2016
Whoo! Another heart-pounder! Good for Roger for not killing Evanston... even though he would've deserved it, in my opinion. And even Martin has to pass out eventually from a nasty wound or two. Or three, or four, or a dozen... I swear, that guy's got to be a meta-human in the series: he can take hits that would likely kill an average man and still be able to kick serious buttocks.

One more chapter left after this, you say? I look forward to it! Though, I will be sad that the story's coming to a close... but I bet you'd probably be celebrating because it's taken you over ten years to get it done. XD
Koko chapter 17 . 10/31/2016
O my god please tell me your going to finish this story! I love it, been reading it just too good not to wrap up! My goodness it's so awesome and with the new show i just want to read all the awesome stories I can ! Please up date soon!
jumafan chapter 17 . 10/20/2016
Hurray, an update! I loved it! Your story has it all - action, bloodshed, thrill and also a little fun. You've written it in a really exciting manner, fleshed out with lots of details, I could almost see it happen like in a movie. And I loved the fact that you've made the action in this chapter Roger-centered and just in the right way. Fits Rog's character perfectly.
Though normally rather reluctant to risk something and to make use of force (especially deadly force) when he has to he, he's actually as tough a cop and a fighter as Riggs - just a little older (and okay, definitely more on the worrywart-side ;-) ), but - luckily - not as vindictive (except when his loved ones are threatened).
I'm really looking forward to the next (final?) chapter and also hope you'v got still more stories up your sleeve.
IrrlandAlmondd chapter 16 . 6/17/2016
This is amazing! I really hope you continue this or at least finish it, give us some hope to whether or not Riggs and Roger will make it out alive and in one piece, and hopefully get back on the force as partners again. So I beg you, please, please, please finish this amazing story. 3
jumafan chapter 16 . 4/25/2016
Thanks for another very thrilling chapter, it's been a pleasure to read. Another hole in Riggs, poor guy.
Now I'm chewing my nails what's with Rog. Please update again soon!
Caricature of a Witch chapter 16 . 4/11/2016
You're not someone to give your characters a break, huh...? Well... I'm really glad you're updating fairly frequently, and I do hope you're not about to kill anyone important. Do you usually kill characters, do I need to be worried about the two?
Watership's Nightwish Rat chapter 16 . 3/24/2016
Cool chapter! Poor Martin... the guy's like a walking target... Oh man, hopefully Roger is okay... I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :D
jumafan chapter 15 . 3/10/2016
My compliments to this really good chapter! I really like the way you describe the environment and the ongoing action, very rich in detail. You did a very good job of it, I could almost see the boys before my eyes in that office.
The cliffhanger at the end is also very nice! And I hope you'll update soon before the suspense is killing me ;-)
frogs hair chapter 15 . 2/27/2016
Uh - oh ... looks like plenty of trouble ahead. Of course, I wouldn't want it any other way. LOL... Well done!
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