|Reviews for Undeniably Desirable|
| Hana-chanS2 chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Why is this so funny? omgg xD my heart hurts to read this but...im dying of laughter!
| K chapter 3 . 9/1/2010
HAH! Started with Hajime. I snickered.
| JellyBeanForest chapter 3 . 10/1/2009
That was... traumatizing. Tramitizing-ly hilarious.
You know, I don't usually like yaoi between straight characters, but this fic is really well done. Bravo!
I kind of expected Kenshin to go a little rougher on Kaoru considering his recent sexual experiences up to that point, but I guess he's just too nice, and I can't see him acting like that anyway. But I can see the other characters acting the way they did... that is, in an alternate reality where Kenshin had some sort of permanent TAG spray meant to attract anything with a heartbeat and certain classes of rocks within a two mile radius. P
| fluffybluff chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
ARGH WADEEHEL U RUINN MY BRAIN *screeching sound coming out of my head*
Oh well... *favourited* tehehehe... :)
| tenken22 chapter 7 . 3/21/2009
My god... never expected it. I've always hated yaoi, yuri etc., but i started this because it was a completed humor fic. And a mighty hilarious one it turned out to be. The best I've read by miles... You've gotta be mad to come up with something like this... Well done!
| Sapphirie chapter 7 . 10/21/2008
That was really hilarious!
I don't approve of yaoi though...
But since your fic didn't include anything about shounen-ai I guess it was okay...
| Sapphirie chapter 6 . 10/21/2008
I was expecting Kaoru's clothes to be torn off...
| Sapphirie chapter 5 . 10/21/2008
“Yeah, it’s only natural that they’d be attracted to you.” Suddenly Sano’s eyes flashed. “But I’ll tell you what really gets to me. That greasy cop, Saitou Hajime. The way he looks at you- that bastard. I want to rip him apart!” Sano was getting angry. “How dare he look at you like that!”
“Uh…” Kenshin said.
“Don’t tell me you haven’t noticed. The way that pervert stares at you really pisses me off. I hate him!” He crashed his right fist into his left palm. Kenshin looked stunned and vaguely distressed.
I really love this chappie!
Sano and Ken's friendship see it through... how touching...
| Sapphirie chapter 4 . 10/21/2008
Threesome with Shishio?
Now that IS something...
| Sapphirie chapter 3 . 10/21/2008
I really love Kenshin and Hiko's relationship!
And this made me laugh my guts out!
“I suspected as much,” he rumbled. “You’re afraid of sex.”
“Shishou!” Kenshin sputtered, embarrassed.
| Sapphirie chapter 2 . 10/21/2008
Devious little vixen...
I expected much from Megumi though!
But where are the lemony details?
| Sapphirie chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
You're naughty and evil, you know that?
"...there are two kinds of lust in this corrupted world. The first is lust for something darker and more evil than yourself. For this reason women will always be attracted to dangerous characters, and men will always harbor some level of fascination with prostitutes and the like. But the second kind of lust is far worse- and that lust is the desire to corrupt something that is pure. That’s why some sick wretched people are attracted to children, and it’s part of the universal appeal of virgins.”
I really loved this part...
Part of me already knew this logic...
But I couldn't find the right words to say it...
I posted it on my blog on Friendster, but don't worry I signed your penname on it so please don't sue me!
| PockyMunchingGod chapter 7 . 8/24/2007
That was VERY amusing ;D I am thoroughly entertained even!
I loved the part with Hiko...heh heh heh, simply because poor Kenshin never saw it comming. Kenshin really DOES act that way in the series though! That he's got this purity/obliviousness about him, I'm so glad you played around with that in this fic (and with various Ken x pairings), I got quite a few giggles and grins out of it.
I bow to your awesomeness. :D
The part with Yahiko at the end was PRICELESS. Love triangle/square/thing...oh if only he knew. More like a love Octagon. Muahaha.
| EmbersOfAmber chapter 7 . 2/4/2007
That was freaking hilarious...in a gross, twisted kind of way, but yeah, thanks for the laughs! _
| Saphyrlle chapter 7 . 1/9/2007
Twisted. Sick. Disgusting. Perverted. On a scale of 1-10 I should give you a negative number.
But. that. was. hilarious. egad, i won't be able to sleep tonight if i don't hunt for a good lemon.