Reviews for Grey Maiden II: Slytherin's Heir
Guest chapter 18 . 8/16
i'm sorry. i see your notes and know you're trying to communicate but all I hear you saying is winge winge winge and fap fap fap
Guest chapter 17 . 8/16
important feedback:

your author's notes come off as /excessively/ wingey
Guest chapter 16 . 8/16
"Raising werewolf cubs under your bed"

...human babies?
Guest chapter 3 . 8/14
that harpy team is sexist. take the sentence about management being adamant about not signing males and flip the genders

triggered
Guest chapter 3 . 8/14
show her your scar before she can ask to see mine
Guest chapter 3 . 8/14
"hermoinie flash this groupy for me. show her your scars"
"but harry"
"shut it you"

hes like a bad fannon ron in this conversation
Guest chapter 1 . 8/14
as much as you seem compelled to rant in author's notes about opposing shippers pissing you off... I think you should go with patricia. his oc friend as the canadian girlfriend.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/14
as much as you seem compelled to rant in author's notes about opposing shippers pissing you off... I think you should go with patricia. his oc friend as the canadian girlfriend. that'll show em. also it'd be funny.
eknae11 chapter 19 . 2/27
Great stuff man. i really enjyed this and the first book. it is an interesting take on how harrys life could have been different and i would never have thought of harry not being the hero. It was a very well written story. thank you for sharing it with us
Ariona chapter 14 . 10/24/2014
i forgot to review a few chapters back. love the story just one minor flaw but i am ocd so... you said that the first match was going to be on oct 14 after halloween. haloween is out 31. never changes
bkasavan chapter 13 . 8/7/2014
YES!
At the end of the first book I wanted the description of Daphne storming into the castle, and I anticipate that happening with the chamber now :D

I guess I am a bit premature.
I might have to fanfic it in.
Guest chapter 18 . 3/11/2014
Man, it's good to see an uber powerful Dumbledore out there for once.
Guest chapter 13 . 3/11/2014
I'm really disappointed in the breaking down of the Harry and Hermione relationship. Maybe it's the too much Ginny. Oh well.
Guest chapter 7 . 3/11/2014
I think the Harry/Ginny friendship was built up way too fast. The Harry/Hermione friendship of the last book was good, but this went up too fast. I would have liked more Harry/Hermione in this story as well.
AND IT'S SO FRUSTRATING KNOWING THAT HARRY'S DOING EVERYTHING WHEN HE DOESN'T KNOW IT!
Guest chapter 3 . 3/11/2014
So saw Ginny's sorting coming! Haha.
Oh well. I didn't like Ginny as much as a character (purist H/HR fan or no pairing at all), but recently I read a fic where Ginny's character... well, she wasn't paired with anyone at all, but I really loved the way she was portrayed. Slytherin AND Weasley. Somehow combined. We shall see. *cracks knuckes*
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