Reviews for Blue as the Sky
Kid Panther Lover chapter 10 . 6/6
This...*sniffle* was so beautiful, WAAAAHHHHH! I'M SUCH A CRYBABY! But it was so cute, so why not?
Anime Princess chapter 10 . 4/19
So sweet. Pretty fast but that's the life of a Shinobi. Right?
Anime Princess chapter 1 . 4/18
A crush on Shikamaru eh? What about the Nara heir? Never mind the Uzumaki and Namikaze ones?
randsomstranger chapter 3 . 10/29/2015
i think i found the good part of the interner
Guest chapter 10 . 5/28/2015
Write more
makura akuhei chapter 7 . 4/3/2015
nooooooo no no dying on my watch : p
makura akuhei chapter 5 . 4/3/2015
boo edited out lemon nooooooooo! jk I enjoyed the chapter
makura akuhei chapter 4 . 4/3/2015
well that went fast lol another good chapter : )
makura akuhei chapter 1 . 4/3/2015
oh wow didn't realize this was a multichapter sweet! : )
briskd chapter 3 . 11/23/2014
Shikamaru, for a genius, you can be such a baka sometimes. Great chapter!
briskd chapter 1 . 11/23/2014
I was grinning like a mad person when I read.
animeloveryugioh chapter 10 . 7/25/2014
I loved it. I was amazed on how well described it was and how this pair was so perfect for each other. I hope you make more stories like this one because they are very good
Ryan chapter 10 . 6/21/2014
Yaoi-Nee-Chan chapter 5 . 4/4/2014
Loner Kid chapter 6 . 1/16/2014
Everything is good. good plot. good character development. the only thing i want to say is u should add some conflicts into the story. a story, especially a romance story, need a beginning climax and the end. if u dont have conflicts, then there is no climax. that makes the story boring to read since there is no plot twists to capture reader's attention. also u should reword ur sentences. i found a paragraph in which all sentence started with "He (verb)..." try to use more transition words to link the sentences and thoughts together. also u really should work on 'show not tell'. For EX. instead of saying "he is sad" say "His heart instantly sank. Lips slightly quivering, Naruto blinked rapidly, trying to keep the tears from falling. His lips curled slightly upward, a small, forced smile lid up his face. He can't let the past haunt him, not anymore." Something like that...w

Anyway, I like your story. Amazing plot! Shikamaru is AWESOME!
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