Reviews for Blue as the Sky
Guest chapter 10 . 5/28
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makura akuhei chapter 7 . 4/3
nooooooo no no dying on my watch : p
makura akuhei chapter 5 . 4/3
boo edited out lemon nooooooooo! jk I enjoyed the chapter
makura akuhei chapter 4 . 4/3
well that went fast lol another good chapter : )
makura akuhei chapter 1 . 4/3
oh wow didn't realize this was a multichapter sweet! : )
Hatsumi Blade chapter 3 . 11/23/2014
Shikamaru, for a genius, you can be such a baka sometimes. Great chapter!
Hatsumi Blade chapter 1 . 11/23/2014
I was grinning like a mad person when I read.
animeloveryugioh chapter 10 . 7/25/2014
I loved it. I was amazed on how well described it was and how this pair was so perfect for each other. I hope you make more stories like this one because they are very good
Ryan chapter 10 . 6/21/2014
Yaoi-Nee-Chan chapter 5 . 4/4/2014
Loner Kid chapter 6 . 1/16/2014
Everything is good. good plot. good character development. the only thing i want to say is u should add some conflicts into the story. a story, especially a romance story, need a beginning climax and the end. if u dont have conflicts, then there is no climax. that makes the story boring to read since there is no plot twists to capture reader's attention. also u should reword ur sentences. i found a paragraph in which all sentence started with "He (verb)..." try to use more transition words to link the sentences and thoughts together. also u really should work on 'show not tell'. For EX. instead of saying "he is sad" say "His heart instantly sank. Lips slightly quivering, Naruto blinked rapidly, trying to keep the tears from falling. His lips curled slightly upward, a small, forced smile lid up his face. He can't let the past haunt him, not anymore." Something like that...w

Anyway, I like your story. Amazing plot! Shikamaru is AWESOME!
Guest chapter 5 . 1/12/2014
I'm guessing u dono how two men do it? Y else would u cut out the lemon? Other than the lemon cut out it was very good
(NOT a big fan o' MPREG btw...) -.-'
Guest chapter 5 . 1/6/2014
Why no lemon?
JuleMaker chapter 10 . 8/6/2013
there should be a sequel. with MPREG or something.
teehee. this was a great fanfic!
skorpina18 chapter 10 . 12/28/2012
I have to admit,you made Shika a little out of character with his bed obsession,but other than that the characters were all great!What I liked was the fact that you gave info on both of Shika's parent's without them actually talking.
Happy endings are the best!No matter how good a story might be,if it has a sad ending,I'm not into it and you made a great happy ending there!
What I didn't understand was even if the story was supposed to be after the 3 years of training,Naruto's clothes were still the same.I'm always up for a new story from you!
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