|Reviews for Don't Know When But A day Is Gonna Come|
| chris chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
this is a great story a short for my liking but still great
| MetalChickCrisis2040 chapter 3 . 10/29/2007
please please write a sequel!_ i loved ze story!
| Poison Fairy chapter 3 . 8/29/2007
AH! You must update soon!
| Never-everland chapter 3 . 5/5/2006
that was adorible im now a fan of motokotogusa pairing thanx 2 you
i used to not really like it but now...EK
i almost cried it was adorible
the one critisim is that motoko character is just a tinsy bit off
but still motoko is a freekin hard character to do so good job
and topgusa i could totally see him saying wat he said just the way he said it not wat he said
| bansheeblue13 chapter 3 . 5/3/2006
Oh Good God! that was corny...but I liked it.
And shame on you for giving us *the readers* an unhappy ending!
I will come and hunt you down if you don't make a sequel or you could make a *BATOKO*!
Pretty pretty please?
| bansheeblue13 chapter 2 . 5/3/2006
Parting is such sweet sorrow.
Poor Togusa, he just can't get a break.
| kiddtris chapter 3 . 5/2/2006
I think you should do a sequel. Things were left hanging. Pretty decent though.
| Ardias H chapter 1 . 5/2/2006
WOW that came out of the blue...i hope you continue this Fic
With respect Ardias
| green-eyed-bastard chapter 2 . 4/30/2006
Who knew that was coming?
Such a twisted and positively evil thing to do!
| Shaarpes chapter 2 . 4/30/2006
Quit being a self hating "pitty me cause i think i suck" little bitch, i'm enjoying the story, you really are doing a good job, but shut the fuck up and keep writing... don't mean to be an ass but someboedy had to tell ya
| kiddtris chapter 2 . 4/26/2006
pretty good how you turned it into a dream. i am glad though becuase at first i thought it was so...mushy and then i was pleasantly surprised...funny
| Mas'kil chapter 2 . 4/26/2006
NICE TWIST! Never saw it coming. Good job.
| Never-everland chapter 1 . 4/25/2006
actually it was quite funny i liked it
| baskervilledragonlord chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
that was aswesome! finally someone paired motoko and togusa together. :)
| asfsafdasfsdfdsafsafdsafsdafa chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
I love you. Y'know why? Motogusa. I love the Motogusa pairing.
It has real potential, but as someone else said, watch the paragraph structure, as it can get a bit tedious to read.
But, yeah, it could be really good. I'm guessing you don't have a style, am I right? You might want to write a few private pieces to develop a style, though it's not necessary.
And as for your good ideas and trouble having them form something, try listening to music you enjoy, it works for me and a few of my friends who write in their spare time.