I really love the way you write,
from your fics to your author's notes
Like there's that sense
of higher level with your vocab and more complex sentences
but there's also these itty bitty notions like that last "hmm" that kind of,
warms my heart? Or maybe I feel
more of a connection that your higher level is reachable?
In any case,
one thing's for sure,
Your writing has the ability to keep me up
four hours into the night
past curfew, all because I can't get enough of cloudeyhearts.
AND
that Leon has infected me into
thinking of an adorable, pouting cloud,
whenever reminded in my daily life
and I chuck that thought out like Cloud does, but laughing at how much fiction can affect me
while shaking my head
All the while, causing me to recommend this story to a fellow
square ennix fan
To finish,
thanks for such good laughs and the strained smiles and choked squeals
as I attempt to keep a straight face
when reading out in public
I look forward to reading the next three chapters,
and the rest of vanilla souffle
But for now
I'll keep smiling
while whispering 'thank yous' as I continue to read.

Please please please update this!

Man, I love this story. I didn't realize it hadn't updated in a few years when I clicked on it, so I was a little disappointed when it just stopped.
But, this story is amazing. I love the way you write, and I really wanted to find out what will happen to Seifer and all that. I hope you will read this, and update! I love the Cleon/Strifeheart pairing, and this story is just amazing. I've said this many times already, but this story is awesome.
-chaotic-daemon

Lol Yuffie owned Doujinshis! XD
Yuffie, mind if I could have them? :3

Waahhhh? This is so good, why hasn't it updated since I was in middle school? I love this though

When I was reading your chapters, the only thing I wanted to say was "KYYYYAAAA *w*". Can I still hope getting another chapter ?

I can't help but come back from time to time to read this story again and I hope that you one day find it in yourself to continue and finish. I'm sure that there are many besides me who would love to hear from you as you have got a lot of fans for this amazing story.
Thank you for writing and sharing this work with us, please continue!

Aw, this fic hasn't been updated in ages... but I hope that this review encourages you to carry it on!

This fic is so cute and fluffy, and definitely one of my favourite Leon/Cloud fics so far (which is saying a lot really, 'cause there's a lot of them, which are good... but I don't like them, as such..)! Cloud's just a big softie in this, which I don't mind at all, but Leon does seem to walk over him a bit...

And I like this love triangle thing; its left my emotions all up in the air! I came here for LeonCloud because I like the pairing...but now, in this fic, I'm starting to like SeiferCloud... Gah! It's a really difficult one, up to you at the end of the day (obviously) but personally, I find myself leaning more towards the SeiferCloud side... I dunno, I kinda feel like that if he likes Cloud, that makes his feelings really special, considering how he treats others (and it's really cute!), plus I feel like this could be really good for his character, as Leon still has friends to fall back on... Yeah, so that's how I feel anyway...

Also, the foreshadowing of Yuffie's moving on gets me really interested, like I wanna see her find peace. And who is this mysterious man?

Anyway, hope you update this, a really enjoyable read! :)

Keep writing. This is getting better with each chapter!

I just love this story, but it seems like it won't ever be updated again. Still, I want to tell you that this fic was great!

OMG i love this story i just found it! please, please, PLEASE! find it in your heart to continue it!

Hmm, im the 1,004 reviewer, does that get me anything? Like... A new chapter for this? :D great story, and if i had my way, i think Leo should find out like Seifer be all like "your boyfriend's a pretty good kisser" during Kendo practice or whatever to piss him off and then BOOM. Someone gets sent to Cloud's mum's office. Like, even Cloud! Leon could be looking for him and Cloud is going down the stairs and he trips and falls or something! It's school! The possibilities are endless!

Hi! :]

Man, I always feel so weird about reviewing fics that haven't been updated/complete in forever, but I just felt the need do so- so I hope you don't mind, if your still around this block. :]

I remember reading this fic WAY back in the '08, and somehow thought about recently and decided to read it again!

I think what drew about this fic, is the whole Cloud and Yuffie friendship- I am a total sucker for fics like those!

The ghost thing didn't hurt either. lol; (though, I think the whole Zack thing made me sad a bit lol; -is a total Clack fan-)

Anyways, I think I honestly can say though(both back then, /and/ now), is that I'm totally not feeling the whole Leon/Cloud thing. ( I say this as a fan of the pairing, so this isn't me pairing hating! Dx)

By the end of chapter 10, you honest to God make Seifer/Cloud the most natural choice to end this fic on, if you ever did get to updating it again. Because I have to say, Leon, as much I love the character,, is just coming off as a total controlling and emotionally manipulative bastard. I don't even know why Cloud is keeping him around- the dude should slap the bitch, seriously. I know I would have! lol

Anyways, sorry about- just had to get that off my chest. So pay me no mind! Seriously, I loved reading this fic regardless- it's a good read!

-Midnight

I love your fanfic best one I have ever read can't until the next chapter oh also great descriptions the words you put really made me see it so vividly (I thought I even blushed at some parts) and my jaw jumped when Leon came down the stairs and while Cloud was talking to Yuffie thx for making such a great story

i like this story alot i saw it before and liked it but after rereading it after a londg time i liked it even more but you never updated the story i would realy like to find out what happens next please finish the story you're an realy good writer and would like to read more of your work.