Reviews for Harry Hermione: Legendary Love
Guest chapter 23 . 3/16
Grammar is horrible
tkim619 chapter 23 . 2/22
AWWWEEE THEIR KIDS ARE SOOOOOO THOUGHTFUL!
tkim619 chapter 22 . 2/22
THANK YOU SUSAN FOR TURN HARRY'S POV AROUND AND LETTING HERMIONE KEEPING HER TRIPLETS
tkim619 chapter 21 . 2/22
Harry, u will be a good father to yur kid, just give yur love to them
tkim619 chapter 17 . 2/21
YESSS! FINALLY! I GUESS A KISS CAN BREAK ANY SPELL WITH THEIR STRONG LOVE FOR EACH OTHER
tkim619 chapter 15 . 2/21
CHO! U HAVE GONE TOO FAR, JUST LEAVE THEM ALONE, AND FIND SOMEONE BETTER, ITS NOT GONNA HELP GET HARRY! YUR ONLY PUSHING HIM AWAY!
tkim619 chapter 14 . 2/21
BUSTED CHO!
tkim619 chapter 12 . 2/21
wow cho wow...
tkim619 chapter 9 . 2/21
YYYESS FINALLY HARRY CONFESSED!
tkim619 chapter 6 . 2/21
OOOHHHHHH YYESSSS GOOD JOB HERMIONE! RON DESERVE THAT!
tkim619 chapter 4 . 2/21
is Harry really okay having Hermione being with Ron?
tkim619 chapter 2 . 2/21
finally she kissed him!
Guest chapter 8 . 2/17
Okay so overall, a good plot line Until somewhere near chapter twenty. I absolutely loved the cho thing and the whole thing at the beginning was amazing. Then you get the abortion angle, it was a total plot hole. I didn't even read the last two chapters because of this. Harry was so out of character you can't even recognize it, he has an incredibly large sum of money on the books and he is written to protect not to destroy. Otherwise it was fairly good while I think the soul burning thing was WAYY too convenient. If this is the story where Ron is a cheater(I read a lot of fanfiction at once) then I cannot recognize the story. I had to go back and make sure that the cho thing was in this one. So over all, meh. Recognize our characters more and pay attention to plot holes and details, such as grammar and spelling. This is only constructive criticism, I am sorry if it is harsh. You could be a MUCH better writer if you follow my suggestions. Have a good day/night depending when you read this.
hermione chapter 11 . 2/10
Fairly good story. It could use some grammar corrections and check the spelling but otherwise it is okay. Luna's dad is Xenophilius not Arnold, unless I am mistaken and that is Mr. Weasley, in which case his name is Arthur. Luna's mom'a name was mentioned in the book I think and I do not recall it being Natalie. This is only constructive criticism, how I believe you can improve.
Pretty good chapter 23 . 9/13/2014
Pretty good story definitely deserves more reviews and I think harry should have more money or own a manor or something...
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