Reviews for Breaking
will chapter 1 . 11/1/2013
Make a 2 plese make a 2
unseen rigigest chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
makkee a viedo 2 this
Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
make another were trunks comes back
Feke07 chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
Wow, this was more angst than romance
Day of the Wolf chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
I liked it! Well, of course I would prefer consent with yummy Trunks but it was well written. Don't beat yourself up!
The Nine Tailed Dragon chapter 1 . 3/16/2007
OD. That's all I gotta say. OD.
The Writing Crow chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
Well that was dissapointing
ssjEasterBunny chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
It ended rather suddenly. Good sex scene, although I think 18 was kinda insanely strong, even for being an android.

I like the depth you went into in the beginning, describing 17's nature versus 18's, and Trunk's fantasy of Gohan becoming his father. You just got carried away once their pants came off (18's just kinda disappeared).

JBL chapter 1 . 8/19/2006