Reviews for Will of the Flame
Guest chapter 23 . 2/21
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Esmereilda chapter 22 . 1/22
tayuya is just as easily if not more easily taunted than tenten is XD
Esmereilda chapter 21 . 1/22
poor hinata but tayaya can be a total b***h most of the time tho not that it really makes the situation any better tho
Esmereilda chapter 20 . 1/22
poor naruto
Esmereilda chapter 17 . 1/21
this is gunna be culture shook for her going from team gai to team kakashi
Esmereilda chapter 11 . 1/20
lol u can thank minato for that since he was the catalyst for that particular technique
Esmereilda chapter 9 . 1/20
lol naruto's impromptu 'mission' is to convince tenten to participate in the chuunin exams XD
Esmereilda chapter 8 . 1/19
hanabi is totally tsundere
Esmereilda chapter 7 . 1/19
yep like father like son XD well in canon his name is namikaze minato but idk what the family name of this his alias 'arashi' is tho srry
Esmereilda chapter 6 . 1/19
I can see why Naruto wouldn't want sasuke's eyes
Esmereilda chapter 4 . 1/17
well since he's minato's son it totally makes sense that he would have have them
Esmereilda chapter 1 . 1/16
ok I didn't see that coming
Reality check chapter 23 . 5/20/2016
A dead-end story this is what happens when you focus on paired and not the story itself and as long as the fanfic I just keep obsessing on couples and parents this will be the end result of the story maybe you guys should go read Star Wars fanfic to learn how to properly do a fanfic then again this is what I expect you guys weren't actually do a good Naruto story remember the story is the first key II is the characters who have a good story characters have nothing to work with don't get me wrong I like the pairing you did in this one but I forgot rule 1 of writing a story have a good story to keep people interested not your fantasy couples this is why most fanfic spell put a fanfic artist see themselves as the characters that they're in love with so that's why he put them together or they're in love with the actress who voices them or they live in the field romance is from high school so they take it out on the characters in the story wrong choice just try to keep that in mind when you write a story don't follow your personal emotions to influence your story that's why most fanfic fail
Guest chapter 23 . 3/29/2016
Is Naruto supposed to act like a retard or is he going to kill himself.
SoFarFromEms chapter 23 . 4/21/2015
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I want to know what happens to Narutos relationship with Tayuya
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