Reviews for Will of the Flame
Reality check chapter 23 . 5/20
A dead-end story this is what happens when you focus on paired and not the story itself and as long as the fanfic I just keep obsessing on couples and parents this will be the end result of the story maybe you guys should go read Star Wars fanfic to learn how to properly do a fanfic then again this is what I expect you guys weren't actually do a good Naruto story remember the story is the first key II is the characters who have a good story characters have nothing to work with don't get me wrong I like the pairing you did in this one but I forgot rule 1 of writing a story have a good story to keep people interested not your fantasy couples this is why most fanfic spell put a fanfic artist see themselves as the characters that they're in love with so that's why he put them together or they're in love with the actress who voices them or they live in the field romance is from high school so they take it out on the characters in the story wrong choice just try to keep that in mind when you write a story don't follow your personal emotions to influence your story that's why most fanfic fail
Guest chapter 23 . 3/29
Is Naruto supposed to act like a retard or is he going to kill himself.
SoFarFromEms chapter 23 . 4/21/2015
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I want to know what happens to Narutos relationship with Tayuya
Guest chapter 7 . 2/11/2015
Is This Harem Fic Or NaruTayu Fic? Please Anwer
Chrisfragger chapter 1 . 7/26/2014
I cannot understand this relationship. How can Naruto love or even like someone that helped to cause the Death of his precious jiji? Can you explain that to me?
RaidenUzumaki14 chapter 7 . 4/28/2014
it was on the toad scroll but as im sure u know now his name was minato namikaze. his mom was kushina uzumaki.
Andigatron chapter 23 . 1/28/2014
It was a very nice story, i'm just a little sad, that you didn't continue it.
Especially with that cliffhanger!
Well i hope you will pick up this story again.
ToxicReader chapter 17 . 12/2/2013
Tenten's a bitch I fucking hate her so damn much!
Morbid Guest chapter 21 . 4/1/2013
Weird... I felt Naruto would and should die although he's my favorite character.. o_O
Soulfire91 chapter 23 . 10/17/2012
This is quite the incredible story you have goin' here. It definitely puts an interesting spin on both parties and I like how you portray it. Keep up the good work!
awolfofredmoon chapter 23 . 9/12/2012
i have to say this is a very original fic i like the interactions between naruto and tenten along with Tayuya the characters are well developed and the only thing that sucks is it hasnt been up dated
dalulzing chapter 23 . 8/27/2012
MOAR
Ruvian chapter 22 . 1/9/2012
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Ruvian chapter 23 . 12/7/2011
its been 4 years and still no new chapter? .
phppsmss chapter 23 . 10/12/2011
OMG Update!
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