Reviews for Betrayal
lovemya2000 chapter 1 . 6/22
Good Story. It Says A Lot About Bigots That They Care More About Themselves And Their Own Happiness And Perceived Betrayals Over A Loved Ones Happiness. Can't Feel Too Sorry For Bella. She Chose Hatred Over Her Family Which Is A Lot Less Sympathetic Than Andromeda Or Any Blasted Off Blood Traitors Black On The Tree Choosing Love
Don't get to close chapter 1 . 3/18
Love this story. I'm obsessed with black family fics
Gitana del Sol chapter 1 . 3/4
THIS! I love this! I have always thought that Andromeda's marriage to Ted was seen as a great source of betrayal, more so than disappointment, to her sisters. I loved Bella throwing a tantrum, flinging the vases and anything else she could get her hands on against the walls, until finally she was out of things to throw but not out of steam. I liked your Rodolphus a lot, too, as he sort of lets his wife rage but when she seems about to do something crazy, he tries to be the voice of some reason.
cindylili chapter 1 . 1/17
That last memory/flashback was amazing. I even remember that art from AKO ;)
Hpdwlotr24 chapter 1 . 4/29/2014
Gosh, I once your version of Bellatrix. This is perfect. It's utterly chilling when she says in a level voice that she's going to kill her. Perfect.
Audrey.Hawkins chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
Sirius was always the cool and careless,fearless to even face her when her own husband could not
MuggleCreator chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
Oh dear. Because she loved him.
What a mess...
SerpentEmpress chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
the way you wrote Bellatrix's feelings made me angry towards Andromeda you are an amazing writer keep it up
Er-my-nee Weasley chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
I never thought i'd say this but poor Bella
HerGoldenWings chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
Bella is so emotional when you write her.

I love it.
Sugar-Coated Shinigami chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
I love how you took Bella to a whole new level, so to speak. This is one of my favourites! I do wish to know what the letter said though. This is my first reveiw so I am trying to make it the best!
blissedoutvixen chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
Wow.
elisekhi chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
really good, all your one shots have really good endings, they give me chill bumps.
Jasminny chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
i love how this story contains the conversation bellatrix and andromeda had

in chapter eight of a keen observer. i think that was brilliant:] this is a great,

no absolutely SUPERB one shot:]
Youko-Kokuryuuha chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
Ah, it's as if it's a cut scene from "A Keen Observer." Very nicely done, DDS.

~Koky
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