Reviews for Accidental
Shadow Behind The Sun chapter 1 . 5/30/2014
This is very well-written. I absolutely love all the romance about it. It's easy to write this couple as dark, but this shows them in a rare moment of frivolity. I think my favorite line is "let the world turn without you tonight". I also like the length of this fic. It's not too long for a one-shot, but it still manages to have multiple scenes with which to tell a complete story. Great work!
RandyWrites chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
So full of fluff, I'm slightly worried I might be drowing in the fuzz... Wait, no, that's just that ol' torn stuffed animal from way back when...
The only thing that rubbed me the wrong way about this (which was actually the focus of this whole fic, ironically) was how our couple here kept pointing out how 'accidental' their love was. Idk, I just... It just didn't feel right to me, & kept me from enjoying this at first.
After another read, I realized how well you handled it, how you really weren't repeating the same excuse that some authors will do. And that's why the fluff was so much more enjoyable. The writing for this was excellent, and I love the dramatic turns this one-shot took. It's a very self-contained story & perfect for RobRae fans who just want a little fluff to start their day. An excellent read! :)
DemolitionLvr chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
aw that was so cute. and Raven definitely needs more excitement, especially in the form of an adrenaline junkie boyfriend :)
Concolor44 chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
Spinning and spinning, your head craned back, looking up at the night sky or the tree branches or the power lines that looped over the back yard ... spinning while a hundred thousand golden leaves twirl around you in a high wind kicked up by an approaching storm ... spinning and flipping your feet around and around in the snow, making crazy loops and circles in the fresh powder ...

It has been many years since I last did that. Many, many years. My little sister and I used to do that in the gloaming behind our house, turning until we were so dizzy we could no longer stand, falling onto the fresh grass and laughing and watching the sky enter a repeating loop of quick circles fabricated by our thoroughly-confused semi-circular canals.

You have brought this memory back for me full-force with this ... this ... delight-in-the-form-of-words.

I'm normally "just okay" with fluff, and this was pretty fluffy. But it was GRAND fluff. Superior fluff. Genuine and heartfelt and REAL.

This goes in Favorites. If I had a Super-Favorites category, I'd put it there.

I have to ... MUST ... go check out your other work.
marcialouise chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
what a MASTERPIECE! :) love this story sooo much! cute, fun and carefree! RAVENxROBIN for life x. keep writing!
Toboe LoneWolf's Crazy Friend chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
Hey, Toboe!

It's me, Anonymous. Yes, I answer as Anonymous. I love your story! It's not cheesy but extremely romantic. And I quote, "Screw the world." I love it; I love your writing; it's so idealistic. Hm...I'm going to dream about your story tonight. Oh!
NIVNIV chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
Fluffy and cute i like it:))

Kudos to u...
Rubik's Cubed chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
Very cute.
Maya Mystique chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
I love it! and i usually dont like RobRae fluffiness... i read RobStar for that..RobRae's usually serious..
Maximus- Reborn chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
One simple word- Beautiful.

The descriptions of the characters and environment were done extremely well. I'll learn alot from this type of writing. 5/5

Oh, and long live RobinxRaven!
Super Reader chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
Aw. That was incredibly sweet. So cute and carefree! :)
saaski-crys chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
Aw... that was really sweet... You should do more like that!
Aileene chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
Oh dear gods, I haven't reviewed this yet?...I swear I need to have my head checked. I have read this at least four times, I adore it. SO sweet, such a good interpretation of the theme. I love the reaction of beastboy, I love the lightness and the shadows in it.

Just a lovely story :)

FullFathomFive chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
Aw, great story. Awesome, awesome...

Keep up the good work

Switchblade237 chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
Woah... *blinks* I think you just single-handedly made me a Robin/Raven fan...

But seriously, this was a very well written fic - very carefree-ish, if you know what I mean. I like it! Very sweet!
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