|Reviews for Checkmate|
| Ashen Author chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
Under assault with no place to vault. You so stole that from Foxtrot. Still, Awesome.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
All I know is the chess scene plagiarized the shit out of FoxTrot (the cartoon by Bill Amend) even verbatim. So yeah, failsauce for that.
| Concolor44 chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
Yes, warm fuzzies abound, leap, frolic, and multiply! Raven's not such a bad egg, eh?
I appreciate your attention to grammar and spelling. So refreshing! And BB's Red-versus-White speech was ... um ... very interesting. Certainly different. But did he REALLY think Raven wouldn't guess he'd researched it? Come on!
| Denalien chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
Fhju,well actually it's better then other 2 of your storys! Gah!
I still can't look at Star,Robin,Raven,BB,and Slade!From now on Cy will be my fav! griheh Xp
| Twizzlers182 chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
"under assault with no place to vault"
You totally stole that line from Foxtrot
| AlsoSprachOdin chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
Only one thing to say.
"massive amount of information"? This is chess, not D&D.
| Shadow in the Rain chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
i am feeling the fuzzies. :) awesome job.
| bbissocute chapter 1 . 11/30/2007
Aww. I loved the end. So cute. Excellent job.
| Confuzzle333 chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
Very cute, I like it. 3 nice to see just some friendship stories.
| Beautiful Thief chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
ALMOST BETTER THAN FLY!
Sorry if I seem like a hyper little stalker, but after Fly I had to see if you wrote anything else I loved. heheheh.
| NightWarrior chapter 1 . 4/14/2007
Not bad, but...
What everyone else has said about stealing bits from FoxTrot. One would have been a nice little homage (and I can see BB spouting off the first line), but FOUR?
You're obviously more than competent enough to write your own jokes-so I'd suggest you do that instead. :)
| i.am.emerson.tuesday chapter 1 . 1/25/2007
very in character and cute!
| Scribe of Aurora chapter 1 . 5/26/2006
Cute! Gives you that warm, fuzzy feeling.
Lol, someone's been reading too much Fox Trot...
| Audley chapter 1 . 5/24/2006
Yes...the fuzzies are soft...I want to pet them...aah...how nice...
OUCH! One of them bit me.
Audley Tee Hee
| Will-the-Tankadin chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
M... friendship fuzzies... gllaragh... (drools) What's that? You can't eat them? Uh... yeah... Good fic, however unlikely it was. _;