Reviews for Between The Lines
Kyu-Momo chapter 5 . 4/13/2013
Wow, I really enjoyed this! Well done! :)
Guest chapter 5 . 7/18/2012
so i happen to come across this..and its really good..and you should finish it lol
xxxNikki-Kinoxxx chapter 5 . 4/10/2007
NO! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
Kaye - K chapter 5 . 7/10/2006
This is actually the first full Ronin fic I've ever read. The first chapter really does draw the reader in. I did sort of speed through some of the dialogue between Sage and Rowen, I would have liked to hear the others talk more, but you did admit yourself that it was Sage and Rowen centric. So, I guess I can't blame you for that. Overall, it was written and paced very well. It's nice to hear a take on how they're dealing with their new armors. Nice job, I enjoyed reading it!
Ed Girl chapter 5 . 5/19/2006
I love this. Please continue!
Sifirela chapter 1 . 5/13/2006
This. Is. Amazing! LG was right! You are an amazing writer. This is only the first chapter for me to read, but the interaction between the Sage and Rowen were excellent! I am so going to the next chapter. Usually Ronin Warrior fanfics don't pull me in, but this does.

Good job!
Marie Kenobi chapter 5 . 5/12/2006
This was such a great story; I can't wait for more! It doesn't bother me at all that there wasn't really any action. The INTERaction between the guys made it a million times better than any battle scene could and you had some DEEP lines in here concerning how close the guys were that stuck with me pretty hard. The two I remember most are Rowen's comments on letting the decisions be Ryo's choice since he was still in charge and how they could point each other out even if they were blindfolded and hadn't seen each other in weeks. There were one or two more that I can't remember, but I can tell thanks to this story that wherever you are headed, it will be good. Can't wait for more! :D
Haleykim chapter 5 . 4/24/2006
Wahoo! A new chapter! And the plot thickens... I like your notion of delving, sounds very interesting. Can't wait to find out what more good stuff you have in store for us!

Keep up the good work!
Meira Evenstar chapter 5 . 4/21/2006
Ah, man! That update was awesome! I'm really looking forward to more of your work. I'm really anxious in finding out what's gonna happen next. Keep up the awesome job!

~Meira~
TeahLeafs chapter 5 . 4/20/2006
Awesome chapter!

I liked the fact that you focused on the more psychological stuff! I love that stuff! I found myself going

"Woah!" along with Rowen with the discoveries he made! lol!

I was however roughly annoyed by him and how he acted towards cye. It just seemed like Rowen focused too much on Sage and vice versa like the two of them didn't connect to the others. But that's some of what of the feeling I got from the characters.

I like the fact that you build up these fears before hand where you provide us with evidence. You had the chapter of Ryo and how Mia's home isn't feeling the same. Kento being impatient as usual and Cye fighting his course of fate. That's really good!

I really liked the introduction to devlging too! That was a really nice touch! And gave us more of an introspective look to Rowen, which what was said about him fit him!

The one critique I have is about the dialogue, it's good but you need to add some description after, to help us visualize the characters more like.

"Sage?"

"Yes?"

Adding

"Sage?" Rowen asked directing his Gaze to the blonde ronin. He shifted in his seat, fingering the smooth texture of wooden chair.

"Yes?" He asked slowly, his voice still raspy. He turned his head towards him, his piercing eyes on him, already knowing what he would ask.

But that's bit of my style thrown into it. But do see what I mean? That's just my thought though.

Overall, Good job! I am really looking forward to the next chapter! And just for a fyi I couldn't help "Aww!" when Sage said that Ryo feared loneliness! That’s so true and just that whole moment! lol!
Ninxa Ra'wen chapter 5 . 4/20/2006
i like the new chapter! i really liked the bit about rowan's armor making him more difficult to delve, it was pretty cool. anyway, i have enjoyed your character development (i often find that more interesting than battle after battle...) and i, um, actually liked the ending...lol...i'm sure that many people will not be able to stand the suspense, but you ended the story on such a vivid and haunting image, it really sticks in your head...anyway, can't wait for your new stuff!
Inda chapter 5 . 4/20/2006
Keep it coming!Hope mia will be making an appearnce soon. Ryo is really hung up on her. Now two women going to enter the picture cool. Friends or foes? Come on Mia your needed! Keep it coming and update soon. Ryo's cute! Update update update!
willowsandgables chapter 4 . 4/19/2006
I'm really enjoying this so far. Four chapters in, and I still have no idea what the source is of Sage's 'spinning' - and I like that. I love Rowen in this story - his sarcasm is awesome. "Spinning - wow! Amazing!" He's adorable. And rock on with the naps! Yes! I love me some naps like Rowen does, lol. Also, I liked they way you described their lives as 'on hold' - still, like they're waiting for something. That the whole world's moved on, but they're stuck at a standstill. I want to see what they're waiting for.
Aurora2361 chapter 3 . 4/16/2006
I really like this story! Your descriptions of each character, and what's going on around them, are exquisite. I love all of the mystery surrounding the use of their new armors, and I can't wait to see what's going on next!
LadyHawk225 chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
Excellent! Wonderful story, interesting plot! You're a GREAT writer. Keep it up! You're doing great-I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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