Reviews for A Time of Reckoning
LoveSpock chapter 6 . 2/25
What would have happened to the pleasure girl if Obi-wan actually had intercourse with her? Even at the end of this story, I still don't know what he wouldn't have wished on anyone. Would she have died? Would she have had multiple babies? What?
Starhunter79 chapter 6 . 3/31/2013
Great story. It is heartwarming and hilarious. The things that Qui Gon will do for Obi Wan, I love it. Poor Obi Wan, he's devistated but still trying to act like a responsible adult. One thing what are the consequences to Obi Wan's partner? First, I thought it was going to be something terrible some horrible pain or death but then it sounded like it might be a life bound or maybe pregnancy. If a consequence of sleeping with Obi Wan was being forced into a life bound then I say to hell with consequences, lol. I don't think being life bounded to Obi Wan is something terrible, not to mention Qui Gon. I see this is a love story, not to say that it is a romantic love, it is the love between a father and son. I don't mind slash especially Qui Gon Obi Wan stories ( I didn't start reading Obidala until I read your stories but I like that pairing as well). Qui Gon is willing to do anything to save his Obi Wan and I myself don't think it's such a burden to sleep with a young, beautiful, kind, strong, sweet Jedi. I loved how Obi Wan would look at Qui Gon with "burning desire" and then either one would remind Obi Wan about his meds. And that comment about becoming one with the force was awesome. The end was so sweet, Qui Gon just talking to him but part of me wanted them to not make it to the ship in time, lol. Thank you for your wonderful story.
Guest chapter 6 . 10/9/2012
That was funny.
kirallie chapter 6 . 4/11/2007
Amusing and fun. Keep up the good work!
Maccan chapter 3 . 9/19/2006
'Trust me, you will already have become one with the Force.'


Excuse me as I wander off to guy snicker.

Shannon C. Redfield chapter 6 . 5/30/2006
Aw! They had a touching moment. *Sweet sigh*

*Raised eyebrow* At least not in the way you think! Perverted people... ROFL
Shannon C. Redfield chapter 5 . 5/30/2006
*Rubs hands together in anticipation* Oh this oughta be good...mhmm. This OUGHTA be good. Tee-hee!
Shannon C. Redfield chapter 4 . 5/30/2006
Master Shithead...his butt in the air...

HA! Instant classics, right there!
Shannon C. Redfield chapter 3 . 5/30/2006
ROFLH Now THIS is my favorite chapter! The slight seduction, the erotic thoughts...oo, this is so excellent! HA!

Become one with the Force should be try this again-now THAT was funny!
Shannon C. Redfield chapter 2 . 5/30/2006
Keep lightsaber in pants, he will! *Laughing* What a near-horny story this is turning out to be! Seduction, erotic fantasies, savage pleasure from sex...oh wait, its not in this chapter. ROFLH
Shannon C. Redfield chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
Oh my this is a "sexy" story? A pure Sexy-Wan story? *Giggles and jumps up and down in delight* FINALLY!

At least he hasn't decided to molest Qui-Gon... *Almost falls out of her chair from hard laughter*
Kenobifan chapter 6 . 4/26/2006
Whew! I bet Qui-Gon was relieved. Not only him but Obi too!

Well, maybe not Obi! LOL Poor, poor Obi. What's a horny-wan suppose to do?

And when is Padme going to be showing they can find each other?...And well Obi can finally be relieved and that should make a happy Padme as well. LOL

FUNNY, FUNNY chapter. UPDATE SOON! I'm enjoying the read. Very original I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
QueenMeep chapter 5 . 4/22/2006
I suppose they are making the recordings after the fact...

I'm thinking you might need to change the summary as so far with chapter five and no Padme in sight, it doesn't seem as much like an Obidala... or are you just keen for that much build-up? LOL

Making me antsy, here!
jedi71 chapter 5 . 4/21/2006
What could possibly happen in 2 days...? 7one
Padawan Sydney Bristow chapter 5 . 4/21/2006
wow poor obi! and poor qui-gon. Why do I get the feeling that Qui-Gon is goona have to go through some prety...*ahem* terrible things in the next two days. lol! UPDATE!
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