Reviews for Mission:Time travel
Not A Flame chapter 21 . 10/31/2007
This was a rather good story despite the fact your grammar is terrible.I'm assuming English isn't your first language?You really,really,really need a beta if any of your other are like this.

The plot was good a little ordinary and common but still okay
animevideogame freak chapter 21 . 7/6/2007
i liked it
Vitanie Tora chapter 21 . 8/25/2006
Good chapter, you do realize though that if Kagome doesn't get the shard from Kohaku the journey will never end. You can have them go look for Sesshy or as I like to call him Lord Fluffy and ask him to use tensiaga (spelling?) on Kohaku after taking the shard out. It's a possibility, besides Rin got along with Kohaku and wouldn't want her friend to die. Besides sango has to have a happy ending I just feel so sorry for her. Well I think that's all for now. Until later

Tora-chan
Jessica chapter 21 . 8/25/2006
wow what an ending wonder how the sequel will be add the sequel now now and hurry thanks jessica
VanSloan chapter 21 . 8/25/2006
so this is the final! no...wait theres a sequel yayayy! i treally love this one. and i hope the second one would be better!
Vitanie Tora chapter 20 . 8/21/2006
Yes Naraku got his butt kicked. Good chappie I reallu enjoyed it. So where do you go from here, I'll be interested in finding out. Later

Tora-chan
Jessica chapter 20 . 8/18/2006
wow great ending sure do a sequel add mre now now and hurry thanks Jessica
Vitanie Tora chapter 19 . 8/17/2006
Yea, Youko! Naraku's in big trouble now. Good chappie, I really enjoyed it. There were a few grammer mistakes but not many. They were easy enough to read around and still understand what you were trying to say. Well I'll be waiting for more Naraku ass kicking next chapter. Until then

Tora-chan
mistic fox chapter 19 . 8/17/2006
WOOT! YOUKO HAS APPEARED! XD
Vitanie Tora chapter 18 . 8/14/2006
Ooh, I sense a fight coming very quickly. So Kurama was keeping his anger in check. Makes sence, since he is the smartest of the four from Yuyu. I want to see naraku get his butt kicked. I can't wait.

Tora-chan
Jessica chapter 18 . 8/14/2006
wow nakaru doesn't realize botan is death the grime reaper wonder what will happen next add more now now
Vitanie Tora chapter 17 . 8/10/2006
Good chapter. I was a little surprised though, where did Kurama's anger go? He was really angry that Botan was kidnapped but in this chapter he seemed to be very calm again. So Lord Fluffy shows up and of course Inuyasha gets upset. But with Sesshomaru, Kurama, and Inuyasha Naraku is going to be hurting. Can't wait to see Naraku get his butt kicked. Until next time

Tora-chan
Jessica chapter 17 . 8/10/2006
wow Botan Kagome don't know where they are wonder when they will be rescued Hiei is helping Kurama who is in love with Kurama add more now now and hurry thanks jessica
mistic fox chapter 16 . 8/7/2006
WOOT! COME OUT AND PLAY YOUKO! XD
Vitanie Tora chapter 16 . 8/7/2006
I smell a huge ass fight coming. This is going to get interesting. You do not kidnap the girlfrieds (while ward in Lord Fluffy's case) of Kurama, Inuyasha, and of course Lord Fluffy (I know he would kill me for that, but I've always had a death wish, jk) Well I hope Naraku enjoyed life while he had it, becasue he's dead when those three get a hold of him. Can't wait to find out how bad the carnage is. Till next time.

Tora-chan
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