Reviews for If A Diary Could Talk
The New Fullmetal Alchemist chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
Hm... not bad... very thought-provoking, I like that! So... is there more? :)
gun-alchemist01 chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
very well told, i really did feel the emotion there is just this something your missing, i dont know, maybe its just me since i love romance fics, i dont know but keep up the good work your doing well so far! )
kishiboujin chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
A great look into Mustang's thoughts. Well done! I am looking forward to more entries.
Yukimi the Ice Goddess chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
Brilliant character analysis. You really got into Roy's head.

I love your use of language. One thing, though, a couple of times you used "your" when you should have used "you're". Other than that, it was really good.

Keep writing! Read some of my stuff if you like. _
Queenphoenix chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
ne, that is good. It expresses some interesting ideas. Keep up the good work.