Reviews for Draw
Sumiregusa chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
Wow, this was pretty hot! :3 short and snappy, but really good! I haven't seen mr and mrs smith, but I still got what you did here anyway. It was really well written, and I kind of wish there was more... But not in a bad way! In a 'leave your audience wanting more' kind of way. Nice one! xx
SRAS9 chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
Great scene!
MoonlitElegy chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
:] Aww. What a cute fanfic.

Love the end description that related this to Mr. and Mrs. Smith.
Kipcha chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
Wow, that was amazing! I loved the emotions of the characters!
wheresmybook chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
While it's true most oneshots do stand on their own, it never hurts to have an explaination, it was very helpful to me- not because your story was hard to understand, it wasn't, but because I like to know the why, as well as the how.
Impashence chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
ehheheh :D This is good too! I get those plot-bunnies too!
Laura Buzali chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
I found it ironic that when I was reading this, the movie Mr. and Mrs. Smith came to mind. So when you explained that that was your inspiration, it struck me as odd that we both thought the of the same scenario.

Anywho, good fic. You should write a prequel explaining what occured in those three months.
Sakura Kaoru-Chan chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
This was good! I liked Mr. and Mrs. Smith untill the ending interview scene which was crap!

Anyways this was good!
EmbersOfAmber chapter 1 . 2/5/2007
Great oneshot, and the explanation at the end helped to deepen my understanding, so thanks for that. Well done!
secretrace chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
I like it!
Lynnah chapter 1 . 5/27/2006
I like it. That scene was awesome and so what your story. You should keep it going.
0ra3ngxsp0rk chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
Aw... That's so... I dunno! It's so... Um... Well, we can wait forever for me to choose a word or just fo me to go on with my review. I choose the second one. Anyway, this was an amazing one shot. One of the best I've ever read.


Almandine-Azaleea chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
Wow, that was postively gripping! "Tremulous body"- love that expression. The rest of the imagery used is also very impressive! Awesome! _
digiblue00 chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
This was like a wicked cool one-shot! Can't wait for your next! ;)
flclgd chapter 1 . 4/9/2006
that was lovely! i really liked it alot. you did an excellent job! _
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