Reviews for Swan Song |
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Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2016 Oh my god I feel sick. Very disturbing but needs to be longer so I can have a happy ending and think everything in the world is fine and good and so I don't feel sick anymore. (That means your story is good of you couldn't tell.) |
Shinigami's Blade chapter 1 . 7/17/2009 This piece was beautiful. I loved how the writing reflects the mood and I absolutely loved the last line. I think I reread that last bit about 5 times just for the thrill. Thank you for sharing! |
Liveforthemoments chapter 1 . 5/31/2007 Haunting. Sadistic. Really, really sadistic. The last line is excellent, as is the converstaion, but the rape-ish bit is disturbing. Stunningly well written |
Siri02 chapter 1 . 11/4/2006 :) Haunting. Good job! Siri |
Major Pinklemonade chapter 1 . 7/29/2006 nice story |
smittyloveshpfic chapter 1 . 6/13/2006 omg.. he killed him! is there gonna be another chapter? ~OG~ |
Navy RavenLacra chapter 1 . 5/14/2006 Aww! This was sad, yet sweet, yet.. kinda kinky! You're an amzing writer and i love all of your stories! . I really loved this one - i love the way Draco tries to get information from Harry, and i think the ending is PERFECT! . |
tenebricosa chapter 1 . 5/6/2006 That was impressive... The power play, the interactions, are perfect. It's harsh, vulgar, in character. Painful to read, even. You certainly don't let your readers off easily. |
lil-bugga chapter 1 . 4/15/2006 are you going to continue? i love this story. |
ESP chapter 1 . 4/9/2006 Absolutely most disgusting, most painful thing to read. You're truly sadistic. Good writing, though. Not annoying as many of these types can be. And of course, the last line was brilliant, but you know that. I want to comment more on your excellence in opening lines- intriguing, and informative. Lands the reader right into Harry's position. Well done. But gross, I gotta say. |
Sooner Or Later chapter 1 . 4/8/2006 It was a tad choppy, and a bit confusing at bits, but overall a wonderful little drabble. The ending got a firm "wow" out of me. Good job. |
Jadira chapter 1 . 4/8/2006 Chilling. I absolutely loved it. As much as I like the tales where Draco is good and he and Harry hook up and all, I really really enjoy ones like this. I especially loved the last line. So haunting... *shudders* |
Swiftrunner chapter 1 . 4/8/2006 Chilling. It's abit choppy, but it was compelling. Excuse any spelling on my part. The best part was probably the last line, it was just perfect. Thanks! |
Hadrianna chapter 1 . 4/8/2006 Ah, that was just wonderful! Just the kind of story I love *tries to wipe that sadistic smile off her face* You write really well, very lively descriptions! Good work :D |