I love it. Creative and inventive, giving a new spin on old themes. Some of your sentences are so delightfully disjointed- and you use capitalization well.

(but not really, since he’s Not.)

I like.

I like the way you described the War in the opening- meaningful and very TRUE without being cliched. Well done.

I'm off to see what else you've written.

OH wow! this is so good! really good! your description of what is going on, especially in the beginning, is so wonderful! I loved it and I don’t know, it was sad too. You truly are a wonderful writer!

Interesting :) I liked how you described the war in the beginning, that scene sent shivers down my spine.

Brilliant :