loved this story!

You have made me asdfghjklpoiuytrewq!
Awesome and thank you.

and that subject of the story? I would love to read that part on the last line of this...the library? ooooh!

that was hot! oh man...excuse me..

This was nice.

How God Created Mother

God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

This is amaznnnggg! I can't believ you totaly changed the end! Great joooobbsss!

*ps: I think this story should be in "adultfiction" section.. Just saying

Beautiful, sensual and heart warming story. Thank you :-)

good job thanks for posting

Thomas James Bennet Francesca Helen Tyler Emma-Jane Teresa Bennet, Elizabeth Margaret Bennet, Mary-Alice Josephine Bennet, Kaitlyn May Bennet, Lydia Francesca Bennet
(Tom, Fran, Jane, Lizzy, Mary, Kat, and Lydia)

Alexander George Darcy Annabelle Lisa Stewert William Alexander Darcy, George Lionel Wickham, and Gina Catrine Darcy
(Alex, Anne, Will, George, and Gigi)

Christopher Harry Bingley Colleen Rhonda Byron Charles Christopher Bingley, Cara Colleen Bingley, and Chase Byron Bingley
(Chris, Colleen, Charlie, Cara, and Chase)

Samuel Amos Lucas Nora Madeline Riches Jason Samuel Lucas, Joel Nigel Lucas, Natalie Samantha Lucas and Charlene Nora Lucas
(Sam, Nora, Jason, Joel, Natalie, and Char)

Emma-Jane Teresa Bennet Charles Christopher Bingley Emilie Cheyenne Bingley, Daniel Charles Bingley, Logan Caspar Bingley, Sophia Genesis Bingley, and Bridget Elizabeth Bingley
(Emilie, Danny, Logan, Sophia, and Bridget)

Elizabeth Margaret Bennet William Alexander Darcy Elliot William Darcy, Erik Walter Darcy, Brandon Thomas Darcy, Zoé Jane Darcy, Russell Frederick Darcy, Holly Rowen Darcy, Paige Lucille Darcy
(Lizzy, Will, Elliot, Erik, Brandon, Zoé, Russell, Holly, and Lucie)

Mary-Alice Josephine Bennet Warren Leigh Collins Nicholas Warren Collins and Gwendolyn Mary Collins
(Nick and Gwen)

Kaitlyn May BennetVince Axel Taylor Lewis Vince Taylor, Grayson Carter Taylor, Laurel Lydia Taylor
(Kat, Vince, Lewis, Gray, and Laure)

Lydia Francesca Bennet George Lionel Wickham Stephen George Bennet and Sterling Carson Bennet
(Stevie and Sterling)

Charlene Nora Lucas Richard Anthony Fitzwilliam Sara-Kay Charlene Fitzwilliam, Kimberly Doreen Fitzwilliam, and Percy Richard Fitzwilliam
(Sara, Kim, and Percy)

Enjoyed the passionate Lizzy and Darcy! Will watch for another.

I think this is the best fanfiction on the P&P site! It is just the best... I've read this story about 20 times...so far!

Great story!

Yet another one of your wonderful versions of how it could have gone. Thanks, you're amazing!

I love this! This story is so wonderfully written!

another fantastic story.