Reviews for Ashen Soul
BartWLewis chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
Awesome story.
SimplyaCritic chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
ok u got me as close to tears as a single shot can get me too
aganstshiper chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
the ending was just pure buetty but i've got to say i'mnot a fan of the ship but this was so good
Not G. Ivingname chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
ending got kind of stupid (can ANYONE write a good oneshot ending!), but good besides that
reader chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
kinda fast but good
ineedbettername chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
No. Raven is emotionally mute for a very good reason. Her powers go crazy when her emotions do. And what would cause more of a reaction than a declaration of love? You DO know why Doctor Light was afraid of Raven in the series, right? That was just Raven when she was NERVOUS.

All reviews provided by request from Tinn Tam of DLP.
LemoneTrees chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
Hi! Love ya! I mean love your stories! I'm adding this one to my favourite stories list. It was so touching! I swear I could have cried!
The Heavens' Answer chapter 1 . 4/8/2006
It was good, ... and touchy... but you did well on the description and portraying the characters. Good work.

Dark S3cret.

A great oneshot in my opinion.
Fattybatty2.0 chapter 1 . 4/8/2006
Love it

I think it's pretty cool - keep up the good work!

Tom Stephens AKA Fattybatty2.0
Agent of the Divine One chapter 1 . 4/8/2006
Perfect. She thinks she is beyond all hope and he rescues her from the abyss.

I thought Beast Boy's speech was especially poetic and fitting. He sees "who" she is. And she is beautiful. :)

Well done.
Olivia-Della-Robbia chapter 1 . 4/8/2006
trust me, i curse a alot, but this is a little too much for me.