|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Psychic Serpent|
| trucksaw chapter 14 . 11/22
"grinned, but he Malfoy" just to give you little heads up where in the text. The "he" is unnecessary and confusing as it is.
| trucksaw chapter 3 . 11/22
You've probably heard this from people before but eh; I'm a weirdo. I was hung up on the phrasing of "she needs to rest" for about a minute which is a long time when you're reading stories. It may not be correct but I think "she needs rest" would be a better flow. There was something else but I can't remember. Fun chapter fun series. Fun time.
| TDM chapter 2 . 10/4
Nice to see Dudley not be a total jerk, like his parents before him.
| Roostertheking chapter 33 . 7/28
Some total of the story is ...
Harry is a greedy pervert who wants both Hermione and Ginny...
Hermione is a possessive b***h so she wants both Harry and Ron for herself...
Ron is jealous ba****d.. Draco was right abt him being taking Harry's left over or used...
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/26
Actually enjoyed this far more then the actual fifth book and was curious if you've done your own continuation to the series if so id love to read them.
| Stille und regen chapter 1 . 7/23
hey, this is an interesting story and you write well
i had a lot of fun with harry explaining to sandy human concepts
| Bellalovecake chapter 1 . 7/17
An amazing start to the story.
| LeVi chapter 21 . 5/31
Hate to break it to you, but Ginny is short for Ginevra, not Virginia.
| Guest chapter 20 . 5/31
Wow! You called almost the whole backstory of Snape two years before it was released! This is an amazing fic.. can't believe it was written 17 years ago?
| Beeswax2 chapter 1 . 5/28
This is a wonderful story !
| TobiSullivan chapter 32 . 5/27
Well, you certainly followed the theme of a death at the end of the year. I can't say that I'm sad it wasn't Sirius instead - Harry needs him more than Dudley. The whole thing is a real mindfuck (can I curse on here?) with the Congeniality Charm.
| Brandon Carey chapter 1 . 5/27
Great Story! Read the whole series.
| TobiSullivan chapter 31 . 5/27
I knew something bad was going to come of him not reading Dudley's letter. :(
| A reader fan chapter 2 . 5/25
I hope Harry can figure out something to help that poor foreman with a shattered leg!
| TobiSullivan chapter 30 . 5/27
I LOVE your version of the ministry, honestly better than canon. JK often takes a Roald Dahl-esque style that is very silly and dissonant with the sometimes very serious tones of the story she crafted. Your approach to the ministry feels closer to high fantasy.
Mrs Weasley can be really fickle sometimes.
Oh, you really subverted the 'eternally loving mother Narcissa' trope here! It makes sense, since at the time you wrote this, we didn't know she would lie to Voldemort for Draco's sake. But there's so many fics where she pics Draco's side when he goes against Lucius; it is nice to read something different for a change!