Reviews for Harry Potter and the Psychic Serpent |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah do more! Is this going to be H/G and D/Hr? Please get more up soon! I love it so far! |
![]() ![]() I have read your whole srory and it's COOL! PLEASE WRITE MORE TO IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gah. Okay, no e-mail address. Could you send it to me privately so I can send more extended feedback? merci beaucoup. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glee! Je l'adore, I love it, it's wonderful. A longer critique is forthcoming by e-mail. |
![]() ![]() I've only read two of your chapters so far, and I have a ton left to finish. I just thought you should know that this really is a fantasic story! WHY DON'T YOU HAVE ANY REVIEWS? It's extremely well written, and I just thought you should know. I can't wait to finish all of the other chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like your story alot |
![]() ![]() Very intresting. Most stories I've read are always at least are in the 7th year of Hogwarts. That, and they never start at Pivet Drive. I still don't get Sirius letter. And the snake is very creepy. I can't believe Harry is starting purberty! (quiet giggle) Please write more, and put humor into it. Of course, I just read the first chapter... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa, Dudley is growing up! *gapes* But it's not out of character, it's totally believable (althouth the image of Dudley and Harry jogging side by side made me giggle). "Hermione had so much - skin" - LOL! Just great! More! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautifully written, really, you're capturing JK's style very well, and I also love the idea - this story has great potential! I'm off to read the next chapter, keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() I'll enjoy this story very nutch, esecially Harry 'serpant's best freind' and Dudley 'the master of five sins' getting to be relatives at last. I allso like the growing Voldie-Potter analogy and well, i'll recomend this story to my literature teacher to read, it'z wort it! write another chapter, PLZ! |
![]() ![]() Loved it! Put up the other parts, you write incredibly well and it's really in the same sort of style as J.K.R., which some people are hopeless at - I believe I may be put in that category quite often. Keep on posting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is good! I like it alot! Please post the other parts you have done soon! |