Reviews for Harry Potter and the Psychic Serpent
DeadFish37 chapter 2 . 3/21/2021
This is a good start to the story, and it reads very nicely. I was impressed you guessed about Hagrid courting the giants.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/17/2021
Did you know that some first time HP reader actually thought that this was OotP? article/harry-potter-noob-realizes-he-s-five-books-into-erotic-fan-fiction_
The story sounds interesting.
Miss Millie chapter 1 . 1/10/2021
Hello,
Good luck with your writing, so far I like it I'm such a H&G FAN, that I don't read anything else
Guest chapter 4 . 12/27/2020
This is the third time I’m reading these books. I recommend them to everyone!
trucksaw chapter 14 . 11/22/2020
"grinned, but he Malfoy" just to give you little heads up where in the text. The "he" is unnecessary and confusing as it is.
trucksaw chapter 3 . 11/22/2020
You've probably heard this from people before but eh; I'm a weirdo. I was hung up on the phrasing of "she needs to rest" for about a minute which is a long time when you're reading stories. It may not be correct but I think "she needs rest" would be a better flow. There was something else but I can't remember. Fun chapter fun series. Fun time.
TDM chapter 2 . 10/4/2020
Nice to see Dudley not be a total jerk, like his parents before him.
Roostertheking chapter 33 . 7/28/2020
Some total of the story is ...
Harry is a greedy pervert who wants both Hermione and Ginny...
Hermione is a possessive b***h so she wants both Harry and Ron for herself...
Ron is jealous ba****d.. Draco was right abt him being taking Harry's left over or used...
Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2020
Actually enjoyed this far more then the actual fifth book and was curious if you've done your own continuation to the series if so id love to read them.
Stille und regen chapter 1 . 7/23/2020
hey, this is an interesting story and you write well
i had a lot of fun with harry explaining to sandy human concepts
Bellalovecake chapter 1 . 7/17/2020
An amazing start to the story.
LeVi chapter 21 . 5/31/2020
Hate to break it to you, but Ginny is short for Ginevra, not Virginia.
Guest chapter 20 . 5/31/2020
Wow! You called almost the whole backstory of Snape two years before it was released! This is an amazing fic.. can't believe it was written 17 years ago?
Beeswax2 chapter 1 . 5/28/2020
This is a wonderful story !
TobiSullivan chapter 32 . 5/27/2020
Ch 32:

Well, you certainly followed the theme of a death at the end of the year. I can't say that I'm sad it wasn't Sirius instead - Harry needs him more than Dudley. The whole thing is a real mindfuck (can I curse on here?) with the Congeniality Charm.
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