Reviews for Harry Potter and the Psychic Serpent |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is a good start to the story, and it reads very nicely. I was impressed you guessed about Hagrid courting the giants. |
![]() ![]() Did you know that some first time HP reader actually thought that this was OotP? article/harry-potter-noob-realizes-he-s-five-books-into-erotic-fan-fiction_ The story sounds interesting. |
![]() ![]() Hello, Good luck with your writing, so far I like it I'm such a H&G FAN, that I don't read anything else |
![]() ![]() This is the third time I’m reading these books. I recommend them to everyone! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "grinned, but he Malfoy" just to give you little heads up where in the text. The "he" is unnecessary and confusing as it is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You've probably heard this from people before but eh; I'm a weirdo. I was hung up on the phrasing of "she needs to rest" for about a minute which is a long time when you're reading stories. It may not be correct but I think "she needs rest" would be a better flow. There was something else but I can't remember. Fun chapter fun series. Fun time. |
![]() ![]() Nice to see Dudley not be a total jerk, like his parents before him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Some total of the story is ... Harry is a greedy pervert who wants both Hermione and Ginny... Hermione is a possessive b***h so she wants both Harry and Ron for herself... Ron is jealous ba****d.. Draco was right abt him being taking Harry's left over or used... |
![]() ![]() Actually enjoyed this far more then the actual fifth book and was curious if you've done your own continuation to the series if so id love to read them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, this is an interesting story and you write well i had a lot of fun with harry explaining to sandy human concepts |
![]() ![]() ![]() An amazing start to the story. |
![]() ![]() Hate to break it to you, but Ginny is short for Ginevra, not Virginia. |
![]() ![]() Wow! You called almost the whole backstory of Snape two years before it was released! This is an amazing fic.. can't believe it was written 17 years ago? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a wonderful story ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ch 32: Well, you certainly followed the theme of a death at the end of the year. I can't say that I'm sad it wasn't Sirius instead - Harry needs him more than Dudley. The whole thing is a real mindfuck (can I curse on here?) with the Congeniality Charm. |