Wanna know something wild?
I downloaded a PDF of the series to read while traveling (already own two physical versions of the full series), and this fic was put in for Book 5 instead of the actual book :')
Needless to say, I was a wee bit confused...

Love this!

Great story

Keep writing as life allows

I think your leaving Harry's emotions out of it he is not stupid and seeing Hermione flirt with Duddly and hearing her about Victor I don't think he would be stupid enough not to think She is using him hell it's almost obvious

This was a great story.

I have been enjoying this, but oh boy, the news about Dudley made me gasp. The Congeniality charm was a real twist of the knife.
Poor Harry.

Glad to hear that Malfoy was twisting things.
I figured that Ginny was in on it...

Yeah. There is a Ron.
also Draco and Potter are idiots around each other.
(It's interesting listening to moody's lessons. Snape's, at least when I write, are ... very different.)

Thanks again for this, it's really well done, even if I wish you'd resolved the whole thing. I'm almost afraid to see if the sequel exists.

This is actually better. Snape knows that Potter is going to snoop. Probably wants him to, actually.

A ridiculous hermione plan. well done!

Not your typical boy. Typical boys want to see under clothes with a magical eye.
(Or is that just the japanese)

Is Sandy voldie's heir?

Aww, how sweet. Dudley can actually be nice and grow up for a change!

So, Harry realizes things that he shouldn't be able to do in more than a few days of hard thinking, but he can't notice an obvious Imperius?
Also, wth led you to write Harry like this?