|Reviews for Son of Apophis|
| Arcanalirin chapter 27 . 9/3/2006
*looks at Khalil/Afika* W00T! Totally called (that in my head)! *smacks Kaiba* He just needs to die already! In a bloody and horribly painful way! And now everyone knows the truth (about Minkah's association with Kaiba and Apophis at least)! I can't wait for the next chapter. (is spazzing out over who's going to die next) I wanna see Afika do something totally badass now that we know who he is. (hopes he's going to maim Kaiba in some way) Poor Minkah, he's all crazy and stuff. And poor Marik, he's reliving bad memories. But YAY for refrences to Minkah caring about Marik (is a major thiefshipper) even if it's not going to be a pairing in this story (I can't help it, I'm a sucker for Bakura/Marik moments)! Update soon so I can see who dies (and so that you can post the sequel! (i'm such a dork, the first one isn't even finished and I'm already excited about the sequel...-_-;))
| Riesay chapter 26 . 9/3/2006
Sadly I can't officaily review the latest chapter (darn you f. But this shall be all about chapter 27!
Khali is AFIKA! I was kinda suspicius about him being involved with Apophis but AFIKA! Oh god, does that mean he was just using Ryou? If he was...WAIT! Your not going to kill Malik (again...) or Ryou (again...)are you? Please say you aren't I love feeding of there angst and sadness! *.* I'm a horrible, sadistic fangirl...hehehe at least I dont *want* them to die, just continue on so I can see how this ends and enjoy seeing them in the sequal. Hey, you know what? Theres a lot of people I would like to see live on to the sequal *hinthintnudgenudge*. Kaiba realy isn't one of them though. No I want him to have a long painfull, drawn out dramatic death in which a party is thrown and we all find out the clear cut truth.
I doubt youre going to make it that easy for us poor readers are you?
| Faye chapter 27 . 9/3/2006
I wanted a kitten so bad-_- I was goind to dress it in frilly clothes and everything. Poor Ryou! He finally agrees to have kittens and then this happens! Life sucks, i'm going emo. At least Minkahs safe. Please say he regains his sanity eventually I miss him.
| Under Finger And Thumb chapter 27 . 9/3/2006
YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! Zomg! I totally loved that. I completely just went NUTS when you revealed that Khalil is Akifa! -squee- Aie! I love you! *heart*
I totally jumped out of my chair cackling while shrieking the word "Yes".
*tackleglomplovehug* Who dies? Who dies? Grampa? Joey? Honda? Kaiba? Mink? Me? Is it me? Am I going to die? ;;_;; no I don't want to die!
| WildIce22014 chapter 27 . 9/3/2006
Afika made one awesome entrance, it was really dramaitc. Huh so he's not your OC then after all, thought he was too cool for any fangirl to have created, no offense to everyone.
Everyones identity is really starting to do a number on my head, you can't trust who anyone really is around here.
| Sirithiliel chapter 27 . 9/3/2006
I KNEW it! I've thought so, but didn't want to say anything in case i was wrong, but HA! being right feels good! nyah nyah! lol, jk. yeah i got your email. *dances
| bakura240 chapter 27 . 9/3/2006
I KNEW IT! *points at Khalil/Afika* I knew he was too damn perfect there was something fishy about him from the start!
and also... NO MINKAH ;_; Im glad he's alive because if he died I'd have to hunt you down and shoot you and Kaiba. I wanna know who dies better not be Minkah *glares* or Ryou even though i dont think he will
WOO you made my day coz im at school not tomorrow but the day after so im happy now :D UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
| xxx.Jenn.xxx chapter 27 . 9/3/2006
-stares blankly- Hahaha. I must be stupid, because I didn't suspect a thing. xD Does Minkah know? / Poor Minky! -pats his head- It'll be ok. (Or will it? -scareh music-) Quite a change in character, neh? I suppose that happens when you have a complete break down. -shrugs- SUCH a cool chapter. (Yesh, ANOTHER one.) Nice one! -huggles-
It was a very strange dream. o.O Something about Minkah Ryou another character (don't remember which. Possibly Duke?) all sitting at a table outside a coffee shop together, and Kaiba was standing INSIDE the coffee shop with his face pressed against the window, staring out at them. xD It's not supposed to make sense. Stuff happened, but it was a while ago, so I don't remember. -blinks-
Ugh, I get so IRRITATED with people who don't update! It happens so often with authors that I like. Probably 'tis why I have latched onto you. xD You actually update. Yay! -tackles- "So instead I decided to start writing my OWN stories. -nods-" that a good plan. xD "Think it worked out alright?" -raises an eyebrow- No. I think it was the WORST decision you EVER made and that you're an IDIOT, and I don't know WHAT you were thinking. Hmph. (Yesh, I do enjoy randomly capitalizing words. x]) No, man. You are very awesome. I don't know what I would do if you didn't do that. xD English? Nice! I'm sure you'll be great, if your stories are anything to go by. ;D RAT TRAINING? Yay! Have fun. (I KNOW you will.) ... You're learning Arabic? D DUDE! That's too awesome! (No, I'm not jealous. Of course not. -indignant sniff-) I wish you could learn Arabic here. / Or, at least, I wish I knew where you could. xD I live in South Africa, see. So far I'm only doing Afrikaans and French. (I did a bit of Zulu, but that's it.) And that's not NEARLY as cool as Arabic. -sighs- WOW, I really have rambled, haven't I? -sweats- Uh. Have fun reading all that, if you can. ]
| Joey-lover chapter 27 . 9/2/2006
O_O poor poor minkah! omg! kiaba is soo freakin cruel! he's like demented or something! khalil...er..afika lol needs to teach him a lesson! whoo hoo i deffinatly didnt think that khalil was him though, i'm pretty slow to catch on like that lol. well i love it! i cant wait for the next chapter!
| Sporky- queen of the sand chapter 27 . 9/2/2006
I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT! I was right about Khalil, or Afika, the whole time... and He's Minkah signifigant other too! isn't he? ISN'T HE! Update soon please! please!
| HieiWannabe chapter 27 . 9/2/2006
So, how many times has Yami no Bakura been raped in your fics? Don't answer that. I bet you appease his wrath by telling him it's because he's so hot people just can't keep their hands, or assorted other body parts, off him. Actually, you may have a point!
No, I don't like it at all, but I'm trying to turn it into a joke so I don't get sick again. shudder
So, Afika has a tattoo, and Yami saw it when he switched jackets with him, ne? That's pretty cool! And Little Bastard (not Mr. Bakura, sigh) gets killed now, right? Right? Please kill him!
'Spider Eyes', eh? Okay, but only because you're corrupting me. I think I'm becoming a masochist after reading your stories.
| Soki-Chan the Great chapter 27 . 9/2/2006
0.0! Yes, that was great! I just had a feeling that Kahlil was really Akfia! Sorry, I have a huge headache and I just can't think of much to say... Yeah, there was this song I just heard that I thought was great and could work in the story. It's Disposible Teens by Marilyn Manson. First part's almost over! I have a special review planned for the last chappie of the first half, it'll be great! I'm totally litening to Brit music right now! Oh, have you heard of Naruto? I'm totally in love with Rock Lee! lol!
| MarshmallowPeepGod chapter 27 . 9/2/2006
I think Kaibas going to die next I right? But I dont know who else. But dont Kill Malik! He didnt do anything!Maybe Khalil will , well I'm going to go think about it Minkah. Good chapter.
| DomesticatedWerewolves chapter 27 . 9/2/2006
O_O_O_O_O! HOLY MOTHER OF ( censored by God )! Your so awsome at these twists! And just when i though you couldnt get anymore unpredictable! Actau;y, i suspeCted who Khalil really was for a while now. But...i didnt give it away in case a reader wants to look over the reviews and sees my acusion and then it is ruined for them. But that chapter was so cool! And poor Muse Malik - iI hope you dont kill him in THIS story...for his sake...but hey...if he kills Ryou again in another story, feel free to beat him to a bloody pulp ( cheery smile )
Kaiba: I'm going to be hurt now...huh?
Kana: ( grins evilly ) your getting smarter... ( pulls out metal pole instead of Pan ) Prepare...to be in a lot of pain! KAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! DIE YOU EVIL RAPING PERVERTED SON OF A BITCH!
BANG! SMACK! FLUMACK! CRINCK!
Neighbors hear luaghter and sounds of pain from the strange childs house. They shrug it off and go back to what they were doing. This is getting to be the norm for them
| TaintedWolf chapter 27 . 9/2/2006
-chokes on saliva- That is incredibly freaky o_O
The _moment_ I add you to my Author Alert list and you update one of my favourite stories.
Is that a pig flying? -looks out the window-
So, Hi! You got a new reviewer! _ I'm not really that great on giving out constructive criticism, so is shameless fangirling over your story okay? :D
All I wat to say right now is: DAMN IT I JUST READ THIS CHAPTER AND I ALREADY WANT MORE! :(
But I think I'll just daydream about it in school until you get the actual thing out XD
Hope you update as soon as possible, my new favourite authoress! :D