Reviews for Underneath
Guest chapter 33 . 12/26/2014
I read this on your live journal but wanted to review here, this is a great story!
nobaru rei chapter 33 . 6/15/2014
Loved this story! I just wish I could see Emily's reaction to Ed being a boy AND being a state alchemist.
Vamptisha chapter 33 . 1/11/2014
that was a great corny but funny story lmao
Guest chapter 17 . 9/28/2013
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YukiFenikkusu chapter 5 . 9/2/2013
"Just you wait until my Daddy hears about this!"

Draco Malfoy line much? Haha, pretty good so far.
Fi Suki Saki chapter 33 . 8/14/2013


...just well...

[sorta lost words for the real review]


Never mind...

I would say poor Melinda's future...!
And who's the one Emily marry to? Male or female?


Anyway... This fic absolutely nice!
I had so much fun and some shock and panicked too though. Haha...

Well... This is definitely One of the BESTEST gender bender fic Ever! And enjoyable! Nice!
DrummerDancer chapter 33 . 7/19/2013
Good story! While there were things I would've liked brought out more (Emily's crush, Ed's paranoia that somebody would discover his gender, resolution for Jean's feelings for Ed, etc), I enjoyed reading this very much.
Guest chapter 6 . 5/20/2013
FUCK!I can't stop cracking up at that dicks...PFT HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Jayskywriter chapter 11 . 4/4/2013
Haha my confusion is solved. Typical of someone not to explain it until the next chapter XP
Jayskywriter chapter 9 . 4/4/2013
Good story, lovin it so far! I'm just a little confused over the fact that the teacher Ms. Steltz or whatever doesn't notice the constant reference to Edward actually being a guy. Since she refers to him as Ms. Hawkeye, she didn't seem to know the gender difference. But then Al and Ed start with the whole older brother, step brother thing and Al calls Ed nii-San. But she didn't really notice... Sorry if you are offended by this writer-San. I was just confused XD

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Flayne chapter 33 . 3/18/2013
I liked it! So I'm glad you wrote it! The ending is well, an ending, though it sounds like Ed's not going to return (being stuck on the other side of the gate and all) but of course it could also be all happy-mushy like in the mangaverse. Ed is really cute in here.
Amathys chapter 21 . 2/18/2013
Love the story. However I'm afraid I'll have to stop here hence I am not going to go on a wild goose chase to read the rest of the story. As an author you should never send your audience on a hunt lose a lot if readers that way. Especially since I'm on my phone.
BlackKitten1000 chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
Absolutely adorable. You honestly deserved a round of applause for this beautiful story. Just wondering, are you, perhaps, Filipino? Because in The Filipino language, 'lilang luha' means 'lavander tears'. Just saying. ;)


EGG chapter 9 . 11/13/2012
Heyyyyyyyy... I just realized something: If Al is calling Ed "Nii-san," doesn't that kind of blow Ed's cover as a girl if they're talking to Ed's teacher? Nii-sanBig brother, as you know. And I'm sure Ms. Steltz knows what it means. Since Ed is one of Ms. Steltz's female students... shouldn't Al call Edlynn "Onee-san"? Maybe "Sis", "Sister", or just plain "Ed" (supposedly short for Edlynn in this case). Just wanted to mention that in case the author didn't notice and want to edit anything! Thanks! I'm really loving this story by the way! It's very funny! :)
EGG chapter 2 . 11/13/2012
HAHAHAHAHA! xD OH MY GAWD! THAT WAS GREAT! Ed attending an all-girls school! AAAAAHHHAHAHAHAHAHA! Didn't expect that one! I love the thought of Ed in a schoolgirl uniform... I'd bet Mustang does, too! ;)
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