Reviews for Underneath
downtown.baby chapter 33 . 5/1
omg the headmistress's ending is actually too relate able. Love it though!
Guest chapter 4 . 1/15
...

Fuck this shit, I'm out...

And fuck you good sir.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/15
Is this yaoi? If it is... *le wild stick figure apears* ~Fuck this shit I'm out! Don't know what the fuck just happened, but I'm gonna' get my stuff and leave! Fuck this shit i'm out, I'm gonna' get the fuck-up-out-of-here! Fuck this shit I'm out!~
SadisticKittens chapter 33 . 1/4
The ending definitely leaves room for a sequel. If you ever make one, I would definitely read it!
My only disappointment with this story was that I wanted to see the reactions of those at the academy after they learn that Ed is really a boy.
You really did a fantastic job on this story!
saphira07 chapter 14 . 6/6/2015
Okay, I'm not done reading this, but I'd like to say that your writing is AMAZING! It's 3:45 am where I'm at and I still can't force myself to stop reading and go to sleep! Thank GOD it's summer... and I really love the humor in here, it's kind of like in the actual show. They have serious stuff but they also have things to make you laugh and giggle like a maniac!
Guest chapter 33 . 12/26/2014
I read this on your live journal but wanted to review here, this is a great story!
nobaru rei chapter 33 . 6/15/2014
Loved this story! I just wish I could see Emily's reaction to Ed being a boy AND being a state alchemist.
Vamptisha chapter 33 . 1/11/2014
that was a great corny but funny story lmao
Guest chapter 17 . 9/28/2013
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YukiFenikkusu chapter 5 . 9/2/2013
"Just you wait until my Daddy hears about this!"

Draco Malfoy line much? Haha, pretty good so far.
Fi Suki Saki chapter 33 . 8/14/2013
Well...

...well...

...just well...

[sorta lost words for the real review]

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Never mind...

I would say poor Melinda's future...!
And who's the one Emily marry to? Male or female?

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Anyway... This fic absolutely nice!
I had so much fun and some shock and panicked too though. Haha...

Well... This is definitely One of the BESTEST gender bender fic Ever! And enjoyable! Nice!
DrummerDancer chapter 33 . 7/19/2013
Good story! While there were things I would've liked brought out more (Emily's crush, Ed's paranoia that somebody would discover his gender, resolution for Jean's feelings for Ed, etc), I enjoyed reading this very much.
Guest chapter 6 . 5/20/2013
FUCK!I can't stop cracking up at that dicks...PFT HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Jayskywriter chapter 11 . 4/4/2013
Haha my confusion is solved. Typical of someone not to explain it until the next chapter XP
Jayskywriter chapter 9 . 4/4/2013
Good story, lovin it so far! I'm just a little confused over the fact that the teacher Ms. Steltz or whatever doesn't notice the constant reference to Edward actually being a guy. Since she refers to him as Ms. Hawkeye, she didn't seem to know the gender difference. But then Al and Ed start with the whole older brother, step brother thing and Al calls Ed nii-San. But she didn't really notice... Sorry if you are offended by this writer-San. I was just confused XD

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