Reviews for Withheld Desires
Borys68 chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
A good tease :)
Borys
Guest chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
what ? i didn't understand anything -'-
TheRoadgoeseverOnAndOn chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
A great story. Very well written.
pronker chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
Masterfully crafted, White Lady of Troy.

"he urged her to go just a little higher, a little bit further ... " was the most evocative part.
Blonde Shadowcat chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
HAHA! You totally meant for the reader to have their mind in the gutter the whole time! I love it!
Eloin chapter 1 . 11/25/2008
oyoyoy... Naughty! :-)

That was really funny, even for someone who avoids reading slash usually, I could clearly see where you were coming from. Lol...

Well written, and the twist is finely done!
Oliv chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
I love this little story. Nice summary, and you build the suspense nicely. It's not long, but it's just enough. Provided a good laugh.
Andi-Scribbles chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
Lol, I'm guessing you meant to make it sound dirtier than it is? Well, that was funny. Thanks for the little bit of Eowyn/Eomer!
the green lama chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
Wow! This was good!

Great summary, and very well written!

lama :D
quizzabella chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
Oh dear, I had some very dodgy thoughts for a moment there! Very nicely done :)
Lady Bluejay chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
That was lovely. Great description. At firstI thought it might have been a bar of chocolate! Different age though. LBJ
enchantedwriter72 chapter 1 . 4/9/2006
What a fun little story! Your discription is wonderful and you held me in such suspence wondering what it was she wanted! good job!
Callie chapter 1 . 4/9/2006
Um...yeah, wooden sword. I knew that.

:)

You actualy had me going there for a minute.

For a moment there I thought this was going to turn into something...ahm...creepy.
Elena chapter 1 . 4/9/2006
Ooh, very good. What was your inspiration?