|Reviews for Victim|
| kremit chapter 2 . 7/13/2006
Excellent work. I've said it before; there are far too few Majesty fics out there, and this one is, frankly, superb. Your characters are real and alive, your descriptions thorough but not over-written.
This is one that's going on the Alerts list...
| Obsidian Productions chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
Very cool story indeed. Nice detail and excellent description. I understand some of your frustrations about not wanting to get too far into somethings or wanting to put certain scenes in there, but having to wait. I go through that a lot. Other then that, keep it up.
| LZ chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
Daerion is such a cool name! meh love! _
This was really good, and (considering that I know nothing about Majesty) I actually understood what was going on! YAY!
update soon okay? I'll read more once it's up!
(ps. paladins! haha! that's almost as cool as Daerion!)
| k0m0d0-342 chapter 1 . 4/9/2006
O_O. I was so nervous about posting this story... I think I'm scared of making some embarrassing mistake. Ah well. Hopefully I'll update on this more than I do with all of my other fics...
Please, please read and leave your reviews! I think you'll enjoy!