Reviews for Once Upon a Time
thecoolauthorwithstory chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
Awwwwwwww I cried when u describe the part where Sakura died. I like how sasuke put his regret after she died. I wonder if this would happen in the show,would he cried for her? :'( their love is so sad.
BAMitsMep chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
Shit, you made me cry. Damn you! You're the one whose gonna make my eyes look bad tomorrow. (It's a compliment... Mind you) :)
xXErika chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
Sad, but I enjoyed it! It was great!
Uchihaflower14 chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
I feel like crying now! That was amazing and sad and lovely. Your descriptive words and phrases astounded me. My favorite part was your unique description of the battle. The ending was sweet and perfectly tied everything together, answering all the questions the beginning had created. My hat goes off to you.
purplesmiley chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
OG MY GOSH... you just made me cry! :'(

tears suddenly fell on my face while reading your fic... plus I was listening to Supercell's Utakata Hanabi (a truly sad Naruto Shippuden ending son feat. Sakura)... so this fic is soooo sad and so sweet at the same time...

bittersweet... yeah... :D

Great job! :D

-purplesmiley-
candyredlove chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
omg this is soo sad! :( BUT an awesome story!
Crazy Cherries chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
*sniff* I will not cry. i will not cry. aww screw it. Ima cry.
einsodair chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
Oh dear that got me crying. x.x I love how you ended it. Even though it was sad, they ended up together anyway. This is definitely one of my favorites. Very well written once again. Great job and good luck.

Later.

Luna Rei Harmony
Okuyukashii chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
WOw. I really enjoyed reading this. I always liked angst stories, and I swear I could almost feel the pain myself. Great job, cheering up (if that's possible XD) someone who is pathetically sick right now.
delicate.desires chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
What a sad story! The ending was lovely, though. I really enjoyed reading this.
lushifuhr chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
This was beautiful, and sad. At first, I was a bit confused, but later everything finally made sense, so I read it again. Giving up her own life so that her two teammates could live is definitely something Sakura would do. I absolutely loved this.

The cherryblossoms were mentioned throughout the whole story, and I think it fitted very well.

There were some small mistakes, like shined instead of shone, but nothing major or annoying.

All in all, this is a true masterpiece, and definitely a favourite of mine.

Marjolein
Ao Ame chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
i read this when i was in fifth grade-back then i didn't have an account-and it just made me cry for an hour, no i'm serious! i love how the story ended, though kinda sad

I hate drama coz it kinda messes with your emotion then you feel all wheezy and uncomfortable...or maybe because i hate to cry XD

But anyway! i love it! great job dude! hope you do more!

(and i hope this won't happen in the last episode of naruto shippuuden XD, sorry i just can't take all the crying and sadness!)

V
AGENT Kuma-chan chapter 1 . 2/2/2008
...this was sort of confusing.

...so Sasuke went to fight itachi. Sakura tried to stop him. She failed. Four years later, Naruto, Sakura and Sasuke were fighting because?

...Why were they fighting?

...If it was to bring Sasuke back, then does that mean Sasuke didn't want to return?

...

And later, when Naruto and Sasuke fought, they had a shield surrounding her. They died. Sakura died trying to revive them, right?

...

I think I got it all..

...

I liked the ending...
K A A Y O chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
it is not a snail but indeed a slug cuz in naruto shippuuden chiyo basama says tsunade is the slug lady princess any way when you say that he immersed himself in her wat exaclty do you mean? cuz naughty naughty things come up in my mind when plz say that tell me thanks BYEZ
brightfairy8 chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
a touching fanfic...:)
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