I love the build up! Very hot!

Naruto got deep here!

nice start!

D'aww that was a cute ending, maybe a bit too lovey-dovey for my taste (I'm too bitter for perfect happy endings I'm afraid) but I absolutely loved sensei's plan xD

I've quite enjoyed this fic so far, and sad that it'll end within a chapter because I am positively dying of curiosity as to what the sensei is cooking up xD

I'm basically going purely on your visuals because I've rarely seen pictures of the characters, so you did quite a good job of describing them ;)

I just realized that the óne other Naruto fanfic I've read (besides yours) was also about them being abandoned by their Sensei and Sakura in a forest, maybe that's something from the series? xD

After your cruel ending of the new fic I decided to check out another Naruto fic of yours so that explains my presence here ;)

I can see that this is much older, and while the writing here is far from bad you've definitely improved in your newer stories _

Off to the next chapter to see if I can make any sense of a fandom I've never been in xD

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I loved this story. The ending was cute too, very sweet and I'm glad Kakashi helped them out. It leaves me wondering how sakura would have taken all this. I would have loved to see her reaction. She'd probably faint from shock lol

Loving it, though I haven't figured where on the Naruto time-line this is set. Just thinking age wise for the boys. 13 seems a little young so I'm thinking they're older.

Just curious to how old they are

What a fantastic fic! I really loved chapters 5 and 6. You have such a wonderful style - so descriptive and eloquent and I feel shamed trying to write anything after reading this. You have inspired me!

Clap clap clap. Very nice - even with the mushy ending. :D

Oh. My. God. That was amazing! I don't think I've ever read a SasuNaru that I really liked (since usually those two are just too irritating to do anything with), but I clicked on this by accident and just COULDN'T STOP READING! The smut scenes were very well done, and there was so much imagery and flow throughout the whole story...okay, I'm gushing, but this was awesome!

Thank you for being such an awesome writer!

That was effing good!

I love Narutos explanation to why love didn't exist.

You did a good job (:

Kakashi had to take a moment to appreciate the sheer insanity of what was going on. The last time he'd seen these boys, they'd been openly engaged in a war of pride, each one determined to out-do the other out of simple hatred. Now, the stereotypical, hyper-active ninja-on-crack was blushing like a blonde schoolgirl while the stoic, silent, bad-boy type was spouting love confessions.

What. The. Fuck.

The writers of shoujo manga everywhere would die if they saw this.

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OH GOD, I almost died of laughter when i read this XD Kakashi is so fucking funny XD AWESOME STORY BTW :D I'm so glad that you agree that Naruto is one HOT piece of ninja *evil grin*