Reviews for More Important Than Any Broomstick
Snape is a shit chapter 6 . 5/21/2018
Kissing Hermione should be his number one priority!
Snape is a shit chapter 5 . 5/21/2018
Bigger and more oppulant than Malfoy Manor and about 10 house elves
Snape is a shit chapter 4 . 5/21/2018
We all know Albuts Dumbass Dumb-as-a-dor doesn't care a wink as long as Harry survives that's good enough. The ultimate hell he lives through isn't going to matter. He be is a pig going to slaughter as far as he is concerned.
Snape is a shit chapter 3 . 5/21/2018
I loved the prank he deserved so much more
Snape is a shit chapter 2 . 5/21/2018
For setting that up in the Great Hall no less, I think a little retribution is called for. Oh and Hermione is doing it, this has got to be good... LOL
Snape is a shit chapter 1 . 5/20/2018
Ron's as bad as Malfeasance, he is always insulting Hermione and he is never right. Harry's had a good chance with Hermione ever since the Troll. Hermione understands Harry like no one else. They always have.
Guest chapter 21 . 5/17/2018
So 3/4 and 2/3 are the same amount...
tyrannicpuppy chapter 45 . 4/23/2018
Great story, it really kind of snowballed bigtime from the original chapter. But addressed a lot of holes in the later books too. Great work.
Krispy nugget chapter 45 . 4/19/2018
Noice mate
DEBORAH chapter 45 . 4/18/2018
Wanted to let you know that I enjoyed your story.
It was a fun and interesting read. It also ended well.
Thanks for sharing your talent with renders.
WeisseHex chapter 45 . 4/8/2018
Great story! Keep it up!
Aeonmaster Aeroza chapter 45 . 4/6/2018
All I have to say is wonderful work with the story. If you plan to make a second one... maybe it crossover with kingdom hearts or something similar. Anyways, I give this a 5/5 Fan Fic Stars.
Guest chapter 20 . 4/4/2018
Hi mom just wanted you know I will call mom today if I am not done I have to go get mom to go get food I got mom to get food I will go to go and go to go shopping mom mom to mom mom I got to get food I will go to get mom and get food and get some stuff for you and get food
Deathcrow chapter 7 . 3/29/2018
I don't understand why you put all that computer stuff in this chapter. Will it be important later? You clearly didn't write it because you are a computer or technology expert (sorry):

1. "Harry carried the CPU"? You probably meant the case, as in the whole computer? The CPU is one of the base components inside a PC.

2. A magical internet plug makes no sense and can not possibly work, unless Lily created a magical internet provider that is somehow connected to the Muggle internet. A magical electricity plug is no problem, but it's not like there's just "raw internet" flowing out of an internet plug. The internet is decentralised, you'd need to place a charm on any and all components all over the world so that they can send and receive data from you (and that's just the start).

3. Same problems with magical phone lines: How do you get a phone number? How does your magical phone line connect to an actual physical line in a Muggle house? How does their telco provider route the call when someone tries to call your magical phone line? Did Lily also invent magical electronics that can autonomously cast complex spells on demand and remotely and extremely precisely apparate individual electrons to arbitrary locations all over the country? It staggers belief.

Just a huge mess and probably entirely unnecessary to even bring up any of this magical technology bullshittery in the story.
Guest chapter 10 . 3/23/2018
Of course. Put off till later what the author is too lazy to explain now.
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