Reviews for More Important Than Any Broomstick
Niknakkitkat chapter 45 . 5/18/2016
This is fantastic!
orystayighterwray1234 chapter 35 . 5/11/2016
'Regulus Antonio Black' ?
You mean Regulus Arcturus Black?
"Do Not Enter Without the Express Permission of Regulus Arcturus Black"
- Harry Potter and the Deathly Hollows, Chapter 10: Kreacher's Tale, pg.186
Stefan Bathory chapter 45 . 5/1/2016
I like this story from its title to the epilogue. In fact, I think that the title is very good : "More Important Than Any Broomstick". It is clearly a very good catchphrase for a Harry/Hermione story.

It summarize very well what should have been friendship between Harry and Hermione during the misunderstandings of the winter of the third year. Misunderstandings because of the broomstick affair, because of the rat affair, because of Hermione burn out. Well Hermione was mistaken to not try to explain why she spoke to McGonagall, Harry had gestures of reconciliation toward Hermione after the Ravenclaw match but Ron ruined them. I reread these chapters to see what you changed between the canon and your fanfiction.

Well, it is normal for JKR to create a little drama between the characters to write a good story.

In canon, nobody is right. In your story, Harry appeared more mature than a 13 years old boy who had his nicest toy taken from him, but Hermione was worth it.

A small critic, I don't like too much the introduction of so many electronics to Hogwarts because this separation between magic and muggle world is one of the basis of canon universe. But why not...

I continue to like what you write, hope to read some new story from you. I will continue to read your old stories until then.
akasanta chapter 45 . 4/20/2016
Awesome story!


Kiwi chapter 45 . 4/14/2016
Just wanted to say that I think that this story is amazing. This is the third time i have read it in as many days. So thankyou for the time you put into this. Anyone who hasn't read this, you should.
SuperVegitoFAN chapter 22 . 4/3/2016
Ohhhh sick burn there Albus.
SuperVegitoFAN chapter 17 . 4/3/2016
sp... lucky bastard. i had to settle for the normal non backlight non rechargeable battery and low quallity buttons
MSgt SilverDollar and Snake chapter 44 . 4/2/2016
Great story as is your usual fare. There's no doubt in my mind why dad favored both this story and you as an author. - Snake
MSgt SilverDollar and Snake chapter 35 . 4/2/2016
According to Order of the Phoenix R.A.B. was Regular Arcturus Black not Regular Antonio Black. - Snake
Guest chapter 35 . 3/30/2016
First you unfairly bash Viktor, my favorite character. What's so wrong about an 18 year old taking a 15 year old to a chaperoned school dance? Yes, I'm a mom of 2 teenage girls so I know there's nothing wrong with it.

Then you turn Regulus Arcturus Black into Regulus Antonio Black. It's not hard to find his true name.

There are so many other issues with this that I'm not waisting anymore time education you. I'm done with this drivel.
Annaliese chapter 1 . 3/25/2016
Love it! Rank: a
Good job!
Faye waterson chapter 45 . 3/19/2016
Really easy read very good story line more for younger viewers then older but brilliant
tricorvus chapter 45 . 3/2/2016
tricorvus chapter 34 . 3/1/2016
Perfect story!
Rock on
tricorvus chapter 31 . 3/1/2016
I dearly love this story
Rock on
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